YOUNG SPIDER VS SMOKEY "BATTLE"

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WHO IS THE WINNER?

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YOUNG-$PIDER415

Sicc OG
#1
Mar 18, 2004
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SMOKEY-

AY SPIDER WHY DONT U SLOW YOUR ROLL AND BATTLE.

So They Call You Young Spider/I Seen Your Pic Homie U Aint Much Of A Fighter/Lookin Mor Cuban Than Mexican/I Bet U Came Over On A Tire/And Like 50 Said Not A Gangsta/A Wanksta/I See U All the Time Actin All Bad/Everytime I Post A Thread U Get Mad/All Ass Hurt N Sad/You Aint Shit/Go Run To Your Mom Panties All Bunch Throwin A Fit/Oh Im Not Through/Thought You Knew/N From The Lookz Of Your Picz/Your Face Has Taken A Few Licks/You Call That A G-Stroll/Face All Bunched Up Lookin Like A Troll

SPIDER-

I RATHER LOOK CUBAN/THEN SOMEBODY THAT DONT LOOK HUMAN/IM GLAD THAT PIC WIT YO DAUGHTER IS GONE CUZ IT HAD BE POOKIN/NOW C'MON SMOKEY/BANGIN ON THE SICCNESS IS A JOKE TO ME/IM ONLY 18 YRS OLD AND IVE DONE MORE THINGS THEN UV'E EVER SEEN/GET YOUR DAUGHTER N SIT INFRONT OF DA T.V SCREEN/TUNE INTO SOMETHIN LIKE NIKILODIAN OR DISNEY/SHE COULD BE MICKIE AND U CAN BE MEENIE/U MORE OF A BITCH THEN "50"

AND TO TOP IT ALL OFF IMA KEEP ON GOIN/SINCE WHEN HAS SHREK GOT INTO FLOWIN?/WHAT IV'E DONE IS WHAT YOUR KNOWIN/AND WHAT YOUR KNOWIN IS WHAT IVE DONE/"HEY SPIDER WHY ARE YOU ALWAYS BUMPIN YOUR GUMS?"/IS IT CUZ I KNOW WHO DA BITCH IS WHEN I SEE ONE?
 
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YOUNG-$PIDER415

Sicc OG
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Mar 18, 2004
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ROUND TWO

SMOKIE

LOL OH DANG SPIDER GOT ME. AY That Wuz Good. I Liked It. Aight Here I Go

Ok So You Call That A Comeback/Man Your Shits Wack/Why Dont You Stick To Suck Dick For Crack/Cuz The Way U Dress Id Think U Wuz Black/And Now Your Threw In My Daughter And U Bout 2 Get A Smack/And Now You Talk Bout T.V./Is That Right/Cuz T.V. To You Stand For A Bitch Ass TransVestite/Walkin Down Mission U Best Keep Yo Shit Tight/Cuz When The Homiez See U They Take Flight/So Dont Hate On My Daughter/Cuz U Got No Father/The Vato Looked At You/Lost Hope/And Said Why Bother/Laid Yo Mama On The Bed And Said Ill Try For Another/So You Think Im Done/Dont Get Sad Iz All In Good Fun/Ill Spit More Rhymes At U Than A Blast From Da Shotgun/So Let Go Of The Titty/Cuz Niggaz Neva Show Pity/Your Fuckin Wit Me And I Always Get Gritty

SPIDER

YOUR DAUGHTER GONE GROW UP TO BE A WHORE/DO I REALLY NEEDA SAY MORE?/LISTEN TO YO MOMMA/GET OFF THE COMP AND DO YOUR CHORES/AINT U THE SAME NIGGA THAT STARTED CRYIN CUZ LIL CONER DIDNT SEND U A FEW FLYERS?/ALL THIS NET BANGIN DAWG/AINT YO FINGERS TIRED?YO RAP CAREER HASNT EVEN STARTED AND ITS ALLREADY BEEN RETIRED/"So Let Go Of The Titty" I SEE U FINALLY ADMIT U A FEMALE/UR AS WEAK AS A WORM AND IM VICIOUS LIKE AN EAGLE/ALL THIS YAPPIN START SOUNDIN LIKE A BEACH FULL OF SEAGLES/SO IMA END THIS SHIT LIKE A CINDERELLA STORY/END UP WITH MORE RINGS THEN ROBERT HORRY
 
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YOUNG-$PIDER415

Sicc OG
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Mar 18, 2004
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ROUND THREE

SMOKIE

Come On Homie/You Cant Even Flow/Just Stick To Takin A Dick U Fuckin Homo/Talk All The Shit Bout My Angel,My Love/Cuz When I Kill U I Wont Use No Glove/Ill Write Smokey On Your Chest/As I Lay You To Rest/Cuz Im Untouchable Like The Nigga Elliot Ness/Do You Dirty Then Make U Wear Yo Mamaz Sunday Dress/So Who In The Fuck Are U Trying To Impress/Oh What U At Home Wit A Payaso Frown/Did Actually Think The Vatoz Thought You Were Down/An U A Walkin Abortion/Rapz Dont Sound Like Music/ More Like Distortion/

SPIDER

C'MON BITCH DO I EVEN HAVE TO EXPLAIN/YOUR HEAD IS HUGE/JUST LOOK AT THE SHAPE/SOME RETARTED LOOKIN EYEZ/AND A NOSE THATS SIMILAR TO AN APES/WHEN IT COMES 2 DISSIN YO WACK ASS I GET GOOD GRADES/I MEAN JUST LOOK AT YOUR BITCH ASS/YOU LOOK LIKE A GIANT ELF/WHY DONT U PUT THEM WACK ASS "RAPS" BACK ON THE SHELF/DIAL 911 CUZ I THINK U NEED SOME HELP/U THINK U A THUG CUZ U WAZ LOSIN BLOOD/U WAS ON THE PHONE WITH DREAMER LOKZ WHILE U WAS GETTIN JUMPED/HAD SOME NIGGA POST ON THIS BITCH TALKIN BOUT C'MON GUYS WE NEED YOU TO PRAY/BUT U WAS POSTING ON SICCNESS BY THE NEXT DAY/SEEMED ALL LIKE A PLAY/NIGGA WAS ACTIN TO GET RESPECT/IM A VET IN THIS GAME/AND YOUR JUST A PROSPECT/SO QUIT NOW BEFORE SOMEBODY GETS HURT/ITZ OFFICIAL U BITCH/YOU'VE JUST BEEN LYIRCALLY MURDERED
 
sickness1

sickness1

Sicc OG
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Apr 23, 2005
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YOUR DAUGHTER GONE GROW UP TO BE A WHORE/DO I REALLY NEEDA SAY MORE?/LISTEN TO YO MOMMA/GET OFF THE COMP AND DO YOUR CHORES/AINT U THE SAME NIGGA THAT STARTED CRYIN CUZ LIL CONER DIDNT SEND U A FEW FLYERS?/ALL THIS NET BANGIN DAWG/AINT YO FINGERS TIRED?YO RAP CAREER HASNT EVEN STARTED AND ITS ALLREADY BEEN RETIRED/"So Let Go Of The Titty" I SEE U FINALLY ADMIT U A FEMALE/UR AS WEAK AS A WORM AND IM VICIOUS LIKE AN EAGLE/ALL THIS YAPPIN START SOUNDIN LIKE A BEACH FULL OF SEAGLES/SO IMA END THIS SHIT LIKE A CINDERELLA STORY/END UP WITH MORE RINGS THEN ROBERT HORRY



^^^^
i like that 1...that sht funny lmao
 
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TROLL

Sicc OG
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Aug 8, 2003
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#10
round 1: spider (the way spider came in set his whole verse off just right, had me rollin)
round 2:smokey (this one was much closer)
round 3: spider (seemed like smokie's verse was unfinished)


@smokey: some constructive homie..try too avoid making your verse sound like your just gonna list things off ur gonna do.. most of the timez in a battle the person who gets the most laughs win..

for me itz easier when writtin a verse 2 put the / behind the two wordz that are supposed too rhyme then press enter to start a new line for punchline.. and use a , when ur pausin between verses...

for instance
smokey said:
Come On Homie, You Cant Even Flow/
Just Stick To Takin A Dick U Fuckin Homo/

Talk All The Shit Bout My Angel,My Love/
Cuz When I Kill U I Wont Use No Glove/
Click to expand...
itz easier too follow with and iz much easier on the eyez
 
M

_MOB$TARZ_

Sicc OG
#18
Aug 20, 2005
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THAT WAS A GOOD BATTLE BUT I GOT TO GIVE IT TO SPIDER THAT LINE KILLED IT LOL


U THE SAME NIGGA THAT STARTED CRYIN CUZ LIL CONER DIDNT SEND U A FEW FLYERS?/ALL THIS NET BANGIN DAWG/AINT YO FINGERS TIRED?
 
X4SmokeyX4

X4SmokeyX4

Sicc OG
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Jun 29, 2005
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So U All U MotherFuckerz THought Smokey Was Done/Wit That Tweaker Azz Base Head/Alwayz Lookin Spun/You Think Your Koo Cuz U Clown on My Family/U Juz Mad Cuz You Momma Lookz Manly/But Lookin Like A Caveman Must Run In Your Family/You Say I Dont Look Human/Bitch Look In The Mirror/Itz Easy 2 See U A Fuckin Queer/And U Think U Got Gutz/Cuz The Siccness Jockz Ur Nutz/So Come Up Wit New Flowz Spider/Cuz Juz A Biter/U Look Like SPecial Ed/I Seen Your Pics Homie/ All Your Missin Iz A Helmet On Yo Head/Cuz You So Damn Wack/Think That Your Black/Stick 2 What Your Good At Vato All Up On Conerz Sack
 
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