i need some feedback for a commercial i just made

[MDebruce]

for a photographer out of San Jose,California

http://www.vimeo.com/1883091
(above link is dead - client wanted something else)
Richard Franco Photography



higher quality version

http://www.vimeo.com/1902683

 

[public_domain]

The editing was good....Could've used more photographs....

 

[D.E.O.]

^^^^ agreed. but it was informative and to the point. Gotta trip its only a :30 sec spot. It was dope. I would use another pic of a camera if possible tho.

 

[MDebruce]

fasho.i got to re do it, the camera was made in 3d studio max need to add some additional lights to the scene and also on the fly by titles part - the spotlight light needs to be a bit bigger. yea i didnt want to use to many pictures. thanks for the feedback,keep them coming..

 

[DankedOut707]

GOTTA BE HONEST MAYNE, IT LOOKS REAL AMATEUR

 

[MDebruce]

thanks keep them coming

 

[BotomOFdaBay408]

good job how much do shoots go for?

 

[THACRITIC408]

BUMP

 

[MDebruce]

yo it is getting re done.shoots are 150 per hr. so basically how many shots u can get done in a hr... plus with greenscreen...

thats a dope deal...

 

[martin_07n]

That dude with the mohawk look like a bitch.

 

[kontac]

Good shit

 

[MDebruce]

video got re did.. tell me what yal think

 

[Dhadnot]

its good, either more photos or let them stay on screen a lil longer, and can you get them in better quality or is that youtube makin them look like that?

 

[MDebruce]

its good, either more photos or let them stay on screen a lil longer, and can you get them in better quality or is that youtube makin them look like that?

youtube currupts video files no matter picture source files wasnt full 300dpi plus was grabed off clients myspace page so the bit samples got messed wit during file transferring and conversation and what not..

i took the video offline, i will post the highquality version on vimeo next week cuz i already exceeded my weekly limit.


thanks for all the feedback...keep them coming good or bad.i love em all

 

[HUSTLACHICK]

PRETTY TIGHT -H$C

 

[MDebruce]

god who is u tho wit all that stickin out right there

 

[MDebruce]

lol

 

[siccness-user]

not feeling it at all

 

[MDebruce]

thnx keep the comments coming

 

[prodigy91]

dope