B-lYRIKALS SOLO CD COVER.. LEMME KNOW WHAT U THINK.. HOW IT COULD LOOK BETTER...

[B-lyRikaL]

THIS IS MA SOLO CD COVER.. LEMME KNOW WHAT U THINK OF THE COVER.. IM HAVING A 9-11 R.I.P TRACK ON THAT SHIT.. WID A INTRO TRACK OFF.. A IRAQI GUY TALKING.. PEPS SCREAMING.. THEN A CRASH.. AND AMBULANCES.. ITS KINDA RACIAL WHEN U THINK BOUT IT BUT NOTHING PERSONAL.. THIS IS THE COVER

 

[SCOCIOUS]

from a consumer's point of view, the bullet holes could have been more realistic. like if theres a bullet HOLE, there should be a hole in the middle of it. and that pistol aint hot, the opacity isnt the same as the men. i dont know what look u was tryna pull off, but it draws the shit off. and the parental advisory logo is too big.

 

[B-lyRikaL]

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YEAH I FEEL YA.. DOGG.. ILL FIX THAT UP.. CHECK BACK ILL POST THAT WHEN I FINISH IT.. THANKS FOR THE COMMENT.... PEACE

 

[Pimperoni]

I'd scrap it and have a professional do it.....

 

[cipherminds]

i kinda dig it except the big parental and the gun is a little off, but different...lyrical assaain for a title tho? i dont know, overall its clean in my opinion

 

[nando415]

looks like theres something missing on it homie....somethin in the middle

 

[B-lyRikaL]

thanks

yeah fosho fosho.. imma work on dat ill have it redon later 2day.. keep lettin me know how i can improve it.. thanks.. and heres ma site if u wanna check some sample stuff.. nothing that greats on there.. but pep it and holla also..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/unkowndamcmusic.htm

 

[FILA|AUS]

i dig the whole cover except the bullet holes, personally i would leave the rest.

 

[B-lyRikaL]

ok so this is what its lookin like now.. from some of ya info.. lemme know what ya think and any ideas for the back?... peace

 

[bayGIANTS]

did you only make it lighter and make the gunshots smaller?

I think it needs more color. maybe flip the background color with the text color. but keep the people the same color.

but really it looks like it is missing something. I cant think what. but it is definitley lacking color. it is too bland

 

[B-lyRikaL]

update

this is the update.. what you think? one or 2? the perental advisory sticker is alott bigger.. cus.. it has ma rap name.. and a twist 2 it take a look.. holla .. peace1

 

[bayGIANTS]

it looks A LOT better but it still needs something

 

[B-lyRikaL]

here is how its looking now.. 5time i have redon it.. i like this 1.. more color.. and more stuff.. u g2 work @ shit 2 get it @ its best just like rap...

 

[B-lyRikaL]

here:

 

[grumpy]

good luck with the cd. The valley needs more up-n-coming rappers. Besides southland gangsters, deuce, sniper, & spyder from pac-town, nothings bein put out.

 

[CocaineBlunts]

iim feelin the 3rd cover,

good luck on the album

 

[B-lyRikaL]

yeah fosho keep a look out for ma shit when it drops, hurr 2 rep the 818 2 the fullist... also hash and brainstorm are in the 818 also..TNB..so keep ya eyes open for some new shit.. peace

 

[UKantCMe]

tha last 2 look better, but the title and artist are not clear.

the PA sticker is jus a sticker and shouldn't actually be part of the artwork IMO...

take the gun out. focus more on the men in the picture... its lookin better though...

 

[D-Mak]

leave the bullet holes out & the gun on the second one & that will look the cleanist.

 

[mustynutz]

I'd scrap it and have a professional do it.....