as far as the song goes, about 20 bpm to fast for me lol, it don't suck, just hella hella too fast.
I hella don't agree with trying every type of song in the book til you get a hit single theory. I think that's what's fuckin up shit these days. Every one thinks they gotta have a club song, a girl song, a fuckin techno song now, a gangsta song,. Muthafuckas lost their own identities trying to keep up with the next man. Look at the top people in the game right now, they came out doin them and still are doin what put them on. People aint doin too much switchin up, that's what new cats think they gotta do tho.
Flo-Rida came out doin this shit , so that's what he does. Jeezy came out on some hood shit so his singles are still hood, even his bitch songs are hood, it's good to try and stay current, but that don't mean you gotta copy "what's hot" on Itunes. Your fans gonna stick by you if you keep doin you.