im new to the forum and i thought i'd start with getting some feedback
on a verse i just wrote, its a rough draft so im expecting some negative feedback. here it is
you can hate it or love it ima be on top/ never took a shot, never popped
a glock/ like you gotta be a fuckin killa to write a killa rap/ wont snap your
neck but ill bitch slap your ass put you in check/ microphone to your dome
if your gonna act like a bitch go on home/ fuck that ice on your neck fuck
your fine ass vet/ i got my weed thats all that i need/ i represent the hatchet
till im dead in the ground/ its us psychopathics that make the world go round/
fuck your commercial shit, thats bitch shit/ i got my mind made up, im sticking
with the underground killa klown sound/ icp twiztid and blaze you kmow where its found/ you can grip the pound, thats fine/ when you run out ill hit you from
behind/ my axe to the back of your head, laying dead/ music to my ears to hear a bitch like you cry, die motherfucker die/
on a verse i just wrote, its a rough draft so im expecting some negative feedback. here it is
you can hate it or love it ima be on top/ never took a shot, never popped
a glock/ like you gotta be a fuckin killa to write a killa rap/ wont snap your
neck but ill bitch slap your ass put you in check/ microphone to your dome
if your gonna act like a bitch go on home/ fuck that ice on your neck fuck
your fine ass vet/ i got my weed thats all that i need/ i represent the hatchet
till im dead in the ground/ its us psychopathics that make the world go round/
fuck your commercial shit, thats bitch shit/ i got my mind made up, im sticking
with the underground killa klown sound/ icp twiztid and blaze you kmow where its found/ you can grip the pound, thats fine/ when you run out ill hit you from
behind/ my axe to the back of your head, laying dead/ music to my ears to hear a bitch like you cry, die motherfucker die/
Ill goob your shit in a 