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Sep 30, 2005
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#10
Beat is solid for what it is. Verses... weak. The same shit everybody's coming with. The second one is better than the rest, the first is the weakest. I'm giving you my honest opinion, you take it how you want.
 
Feb 5, 2005
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#11

IF IT WAZ REALLY "JUS 4 FUN" DEN ITz A COO TRAK...

BUT ON A SERIOUS NOTE ?

SUM POINTERz :


WORK ON YUR DELIVERY...

1ST VERSE SOUNDz LIKE SUMBODY TRYNA SOUND LIKE M.D....

2ND VERSE SOUNDz LIKE HE WAzNT INTO IT DAT MUCH, LIKE HE WAZ READ'N IT OFF PAPER WIT NO ENERGY.....

DAT BEAT IZ SOLID DEN A MUHFUCCA THO !!!

WORK ON PUT'N MO ENERGY INTO YUR DELIVERY AN SPICEN UP DEM LYRICz AN KEEP STEP'N YA GAME UP MAYN...

SOUNDz LIKE SUMBODY GOT DA PRODUCTION ON POINT AZ FAR AZ DIS TRAK GOEZ THO...




- GEEzUz

 
Apr 5, 2005
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#17
nah dogg im the first guy. we just did it for the hell of it. This was probably done like 6 months ago. And my dude found the beat online. this is nothing serious- definitely not looking for a career. It was a one time ordeal. I thought the feedback would be really negative. lol.
 
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#20
Feelin the beat cuzn. But yall's flow lacks the intensity and emmotion that the beat sets. It's like you sayin get hyphy like you don't really care if anybody really does, feel me? The flow is on tempo tho, I'll give yall that. Keep it up.