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Nov 28, 2003
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I would've made the text bigger so it's next to the big pic the main point you look at, the white spot in the bottom corner is a little too big and get rid of the second pic of him
oh, and I dunno but you kinda fucked up on the border

other than that this is way better, good work
 
Dec 22, 2004
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I think the border looks kool that way, Kinda Grimey!

The dude behind Scribe is his DJ/Producer P-Money

I also tried making the font bigger but It didnt look that good, kind of takes away from the main picture.

Thanx for all the feedback!
 

noWetaG

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Apr 24, 2002
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imagery is pretty solid.........
just dunno if it goes with the album title.......
are they driven 2 get away from the glowing eyes n the bg?
jk.......but try 2 come up with concepts (photo shoot and grfx)
that actually match the title/feel of the album......
 
Dec 22, 2004
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noWetaG said:
imagery is pretty solid.........
just dunno if it goes with the album title.......
are they driven 2 get away from the glowing eyes n the bg?
jk.......but try 2 come up with concepts (photo shoot and grfx)
that actually match the title/feel of the album......

Yeah the song is about trying to get away so I thought that the design would work well with the name of the song.