Siccness.net aint fuckin' w/ Smoke? Well why not???
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Really...ya music aint that bad.
But talkin bout you aint never met a boss like me, spinnin my spokes, etc.
It really aint doin it for you man.
I mean honestly you aint out there servin folks and blappin people lmao.
Like, your flow is not that bad, your beats is cool, but your swag dont fit you.
Like, if I was white (im half), not from the hood (I am, but still), I would really try to get deep on some lyrical shit. Or like come up with a new angle or hit em with some shit they aint heard before.
Try some different music, weird beats, I dont know. Some shit. Peep out shit like MF Doom, the Coup, like, get a more diverse take on rap music. Aint nobody gonna buy some B grade wigger rap about rims and weed. Especially on the Siccness.
Like the rapper Reeks on here earlier his shit is like half serious half comedy and I think that gets more respect than you comin out of Antioch tryna sound like you the block beater.
If you treally tryna sell CDs I say set up a booth with a boombox and a flag / banner and holla at people comin out of a mall. Or on a busy block somewhere. The Siccness is not the place to get known or have a career take off anyway. Neither is Myspace. You gotta really come at the game with a new angle if you honestly are trying to take it past a hobby.
But talkin bout you aint never met a boss like me, spinnin my spokes, etc.
It really aint doin it for you man.
I mean honestly you aint out there servin folks and blappin people lmao.
Like, your flow is not that bad, your beats is cool, but your swag dont fit you.
Like, if I was white (im half), not from the hood (I am, but still), I would really try to get deep on some lyrical shit. Or like come up with a new angle or hit em with some shit they aint heard before.
Try some different music, weird beats, I dont know. Some shit. Peep out shit like MF Doom, the Coup, like, get a more diverse take on rap music. Aint nobody gonna buy some B grade wigger rap about rims and weed. Especially on the Siccness.
Like the rapper Reeks on here earlier his shit is like half serious half comedy and I think that gets more respect than you comin out of Antioch tryna sound like you the block beater.
If you treally tryna sell CDs I say set up a booth with a boombox and a flag / banner and holla at people comin out of a mall. Or on a busy block somewhere. The Siccness is not the place to get known or have a career take off anyway. Neither is Myspace. You gotta really come at the game with a new angle if you honestly are trying to take it past a hobby.
you still remind me of stagga lee in terms of your look and your voice.
but yeah like other people are saying the problem is also what you're rapping about. could you be anymore unoriginal? it almost sounds like you just wrote down certain catch phrases like hyphy in my white tee and shit like that and said to yourself if i just include these phrases in my lyrics it will be a hit. ive said this in other threads i look for an original perspective when i peep a new artist. you sound like a walking cliche.
peace
but yeah like other people are saying the problem is also what you're rapping about. could you be anymore unoriginal? it almost sounds like you just wrote down certain catch phrases like hyphy in my white tee and shit like that and said to yourself if i just include these phrases in my lyrics it will be a hit. ive said this in other threads i look for an original perspective when i peep a new artist. you sound like a walking cliche.
peace
just remember that u are doing way more than 90% of the people who are bashing u. some people are giving constructive advice others are not. my advice is keep makin music and if its your dream, then never give up. also for every 5 gangsta trax u make, make one club banger. remember what Pac said, "make shit for the ladies and if they like it, the guys will follow". i think u have talent and you have a great work ethic. holla
If you are white and try to get into the rap game you pretty much have to be on some hip hop tip. Even if you slightly try to come off like you are from the streets and you dont have folks from the streets vouching for you and you can back up what you say you are a done deal, no one will take you seriously. There are some tight white rappers out there that i dont listen to cuz i heard from the grapevine they are hella phony and are really from the suburbs.
agreed. hella rappers doin that shit now. just like that dude who sings a bay bay i heard another he did talkin about how gangsta him and his click is and that he'll kill yo mama to prove that point and bullshit like that. soundin like he was tryin waaay too hard. but from what everybody up in here is sayin i think it sounds like you should just be yourself. spit it how you spit it but be yourself.
I think tha no love track is cool. I agree with some of these other cats as far as your originality goes. Im more into different topics and lyrics than the same old everyday bay cliche. With that said, Im surprised that these siccness members aint fuckin with you though. To me they seem like they like hearing the same type of music over and over again. When it comes to a mixtape track (like No Love) or a compilation song I think its ok to not get too deep with the topics. But when it comes to an album, you definatly must show your diversity to stand out in this oversaturated game. And the last thing I'll say is a lot of folks on here dont give a fuck about nobody but who's poppin now so when you make a thread asking why people arent interested in your music, they take that as you just being soft. I feel you might as well get a buzz going for yourself before you post anything on here cause from past experience, if you aint buzzin, they aint checkin for ya. As long as you are being true to yourself, and making good music you bound to make an impact. Keep grindin mayne.