Rnd.#1 Biggz vs. SlangSumLangSam

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Cel-c-us

Sicc OG
#1
Jul 25, 2002
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www.raptalk.net
#1
MAKE SURE YOU READ AND UNDERSTAND ALL THE RULES.

Tournament Rules:

1.) NO SHIT TALKING IN THREADS!
2.) PLZ keep the votes REAL, NO hating votes, NO crew votes.
3.) ALL VOTE'S MUST HAVE A REASON.
4.) NO BITING..(obious)
5.) 1 Verse NO bar limit.
6.) Verses are due 5 day's after I make the battle thread.
7.) 4 day's to vote, after both verses are in.
8.) You must have at least 50 post's to qualify for this tourney.
9.) You must have at least 50 post's to VOTE on battles in this tourney.

Judging System:

ARTIST/ON THE RISE/ADMIN. votes= 2 points

MOD/KNIGHT votes= 1 1/2 point

NOBLE votes= 1 point

peasent votes= 1/2 point

Self Explanitory.. Who ever finishes with the most point's win's the battle..

GOOD LUCK!
 
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MrDontGIVEaFUCK

Sicc OG
#3
Apr 25, 2002
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#3
I despise gays who blow, advise ways to flow, battlin you is a festivity//
You try to be a wise guy, i'll pull a drive by this is a lyrical activity//
Your punch lines are my lunch time homeboy i'm eating you//
Your a man, your a gurl? Your a transvestite, so i'm beating 2?//
cheating who//
Your like Kate Winslet in Titanic laying nude in front of a doode//
I smoke to much natural high,hits blunts to the sky, I'm rude//
I'm ahead of you by far, you can be Heinez and still can't "ketchup"//
Your raps are more played out then kids wearing one pant leg up//
Your an ugly guy comes from your mom whos picture is in Chaos Sig//
I'll win this match if you win the reason is you paid-off-biggz//
Your more annoying then pop up adds,won't stop till i'm mad//
I'm still glad, you a pimp [haha] your women i already had//
Your bitch cheated with me forgive her, your dead your head floating down the river//
Your a clown thats shivers, where the laughing? my flows are like Pizza their delivered//
My name is Biggz I’m more of a “Giant” then San Francisco//
MC hungry, eating you like Cookie Monster does Nabisco//
Me and your bitch be having “late shows” like David Lettermen//
I’m winning this battle dawg, Tourney King, i’m better by ten//
I’m a Warrior like Golden State, inside holding hate i hope you die//
Your a bitch for always getting punked by the bully, you yell stop pokin me in the eye//
Fuck winning rd.1 I’m ready for the championship//
Eliminate MC’s one at a time, they ready for banishment//
You slang one, Cock, colors you bang none, its my thang son//
Sharp teeth i fang some, weak rappers liek you i hang em’//
 
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SlangsumLangsam

Sicc OG
#5
Oct 26, 2002
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#5
yea ur talking bout beign ruff and eliminating tha game//
but u aint shit dawg aint nathen but lame//
cause u just got an ego the size of neptune//
so im gonna end this battle like dirty hairy ten paces at high noon//
bustin cap after cap into ya dome//
leaving 9mm marks, lead bullets capped in chrome//
trying 2 be a warrior, well i call u on this like a prenump//
like enron skandals ur jacking money and running like donald trump//
smobbin from ur fears thats me making u recive tears like a strait up bitch who got hit by a mac truck//
cause im tearing out ur guts and not givin a fuck//
cause i like to kill you and watch u in pain//
like a lion on a deer ur trying 2 escape facing only strain//
from my lock tight lyrics backing u up on tha wall//
ur getting redy for ur demise redy for ur fall//
cause i rip kats like ur self for pennys let alone bills//
look at my evil grin in my face its dark like satan givin u tha chillz//
so jus run along lil red robbin hood cause im the big bad wolf//
got big fangs to eat you my kiddy eat u and ur parents bolf(bolth)//
like an atom bomb killing ur ppl like hiroshima//
im a gat aimed right at ur skull while im snappin yo fema(big leg bone)//
so im gonna end this while ur down in tha corner//
its ur funeral no1 arrived every1 hates u, guess wat ur tha only mourner...

not much of a verse but im baked and im flowing this shit so yea
 
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BAMMER

Siccness Gray Hair
#6
Apr 25, 2002
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Auburn Wa
www.dawgman.com
#6
hmmm,no story delivery,just boasting.

MrDontGIVEaFUCK-Winner

SlangsumLangsam-The main reason you lost was because you used to many 1 syllable words in your rhymes,like
ex;bolt/jolt,bone/tone.You need to add more double and triple syllable words to your arsenal.

MrD-this line was classic
Me and your bitch be having “late shows” like David Lettermen//
You had some good comedy goin on,that was a plus,but you use to many-I,I'm,your,me in almost everyone of your lines,and that's why there's no visibilty to your rhymes.There's no vivid picture,it's just jibberish for the most part.

anyway-------MRDONTGIVEAFIZZLE WINS
 
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Asthmatic

Guest
#10
#10

Biigz- his shit was jus comin harder, but slang came clean on tha first few lines, good shit bof yaw.
 
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