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THERES J. VALENTINE AND J NASH AND MANY MO MO. BUT NOW THERES NEW SINGER TRYNNA COME UP AND HIS NAME IS JR AND THATS ME. I WANT YALL TO CHECK OUT MY TRACKS THAT I PRODUCED AND WROTE. I WANT YOUR HONEST OPINION ABOUT MY TRACKS. I WANT YALL TO BE REAL WIT ME AND TELL ME IF THE BEATS ARE COOL MY VOICE YOU KNOW...SO ENUFF WRITIN JUS CHECK IT OUT

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Not hatin' but I ain't really feelin' it. You sound kinda tense it seems like you got to loosen up a bit with your range. Keep at it though man.
 

Matai

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I'll be honest with you dawg! Keep shootin' for your dreams no matter what me or anyone says on these boards. I've been at this for a million moons and a break is hard to come by! You gotta make music for you though homie! If you ain't doin' it for the love then don't do it at all! Too many artists do this shit for the broads, money, fame and all kinds of other reasons and never for the love of the art! If you respect this art it'll respect you back ya dig?

Now honestly, you need some vocal work brotha and allot of time just being creative over beats ya feel me? Find what works for! Your ranges! Your styles and your nitch! Play with the song and words a little more! Even if you drop a track and thinks it's done, don't immediately put it up on your myspace until your 100% sure it's done and ready to be listened 2 feel me bro? Go back and make changes if you feel it and listen to your gut cause it's usually right! Don't trust what all your close friends tell you cause that's why they're your close friends right? They're suppose to say your dope as hell but getting your music out to people you don't know is a good thing if you're able to handle constructive critisism dawg! The BART folks will not lie to you mane believe you me! jajaja.. My folks around here can keep it super real!

You got talent dawg and with a little work and real dedication you can spread your music and be heard pimp! Stay true, be different and be creative my brotha and it'll pay off!

Matai

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Matai said:
Now honestly, you need some vocal work brotha and allot of time just being creative over beats ya feel me?
Cosign mayn. A lot more vocal work. The beats is clean though bruh. You need to work on your pitch. I ain't tryin to hurt ya feelings but I don't think you should have these songs on your page yet. I mean if the vocals weren't on it it be all good.