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I like Hostile Gospel a lot. You ride the beat pretty well and your voice has nice tone and inflection. You need a better filtering system, though, because your voice is too strong on the track.
Mr. Reece outshined you on State to State. There were moments where I heard you fall off beat, but you recovered. Your delivery isn't very strong on the track. The beat is pretty simple, and I like the addition of the guitar.
I didn't really like Apeshit. You finished every bar with high emphasis on inflection of the last word. I've never really been crazy about any lines that use that technique.
Mr. Reece outshined you on State to State. There were moments where I heard you fall off beat, but you recovered. Your delivery isn't very strong on the track. The beat is pretty simple, and I like the addition of the guitar.
I didn't really like Apeshit. You finished every bar with high emphasis on inflection of the last word. I've never really been crazy about any lines that use that technique.
Dirty thug easy. Don't waste time on PSY. Killa c is a great guy. I would cop a CD if you droped it. Look into a ft. with Playaz lounge crew, killa capone, or Liquid Assassin. I think they would bring alot of help your way. Once you work with those people if you want to throw a song on intrinziks UGH mixtape it is cheap as hell and gets alot of ground covered at a cheap price. Just my thoughts on where I would go with your music. look into putting your singles on a few mixtapes. You sound like you're working with good equip. If you have drive you will go places that is all it takes anymore to be honest. In my eyes not 2 many people in MN have drive there are 10 or 15 artist that's about it
i was feelin the 1st track alot. on the 2nd mr reece ripped it, but your flow didnt fit well with the fast pasted beat. and the last track was pretty good.
u def got lyrics and flow, but you should probably stick to slower beats, cuz u yell when the beat is slow, but on the fast song i could hardly hear you.
anyway, dope shit. id def check your album.
u def got lyrics and flow, but you should probably stick to slower beats, cuz u yell when the beat is slow, but on the fast song i could hardly hear you.
anyway, dope shit. id def check your album.
