new photography commercial i made for a client

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E.MAN

E.MAN

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Mar 17, 2007
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The commercial was decent, the photography was bad, and the music choice was bad too. If you gonna use a song like that, you edit it up including the orig and instrumental to use only the main points (im assuming in this case you were going for the 'go getta' part) you dont want all the extra ad libs and everything, first thing I thought when I heard it was it was a commercial for Jeezy, not a photography studio.
 
E.MAN

E.MAN

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MDebruce said:
i wasnt looking to use the fly by shots to sync with the go getta part it kinda just happened like that
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lol, okay, yeah, I guess really you should of just used an instrumental or something instead of the actual song. As far as the commercial, on further views the commercial its self isn't too terrible. The photography in it is pretty bad, over edited, over worked, ect. But the basis of the commercial in itself is good, it's not awesome, but it's no where near horrible either. Keep doing ya thing!
 
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MDebruce

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May 20, 2008
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fasho - like i said wasnt tryin to do way to much and im not that great at commercials - i wanted to do alot more compositing but i wasnt to sure of which angle i should approach it so i just kept it simple...
 
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MDebruce

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May 20, 2008
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because it was 3d composition it wont feel up the whole screen i could have made it like that.whole thing is getting re done,thnx for the input...ima leave this 1 up for now.
 
numba2stunna

numba2stunna

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I like the text on the new version but not the way the images appear... I would have them appear as they are coming in from the screen side to the back drop, like your laying the images down on a table or something and would speed them up a little. Fast appear then pause a second and then next image.

What Program are you using?
 
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