my cover revised a lil bit

[Dr. Luni]

here goes my revision but ima put in a new pic of me later

 

[SPORADIC]

Not bad..I see big potentials.Put a lighter border around the text on the bottom so it doesn't camoflauge with the background....White wouldn't hurt as a border..1..When you add the pic I think its gonna make for a sicc ass cover...1

 

[Dr. Luni]

thanks cuzz

 

[SikIndividuoh]

The different fonts you utilized don't seem to mesh well. If you are going to just use a pic...make it vicious. It just looks like a parking lot with some old trucks bro. Maybe a pic of a dead end sign or somethin'? Get creative folks.

Regards

 

[Dr. Luni]

thats my neighborhood cuzz its i dont want it to be all ghostly and shit

 

[Dr. Luni]

i mean a dead end sign

 

[SikIndividuoh]

Ay cuzz....I'm just lettin' you know that it is not grabbing any attention. That house on the corner looks like the Brady's live their mayn. Ghostly? you lost me on that one cuzz. There much better photo opportunities out in Richmond.

Regards

 

[Dr. Luni]

aint no bradys livin in this neighborhood cuzz

 

[Dr. Luni]

so dont be jumpin to conclusions

 

[Dat Boy Zig]

that font is played..

 

[Dr. Luni]

im changin the font cause really it doesnt fit

 

[D-Skrilla]

I think the first cover looks better than this one. There is really nothin that jumps to my attention on this one. And for God's sake change the background pic. You don't want it to look like yo city aint nothin but a big ass parkin lot with a couple of houses.

 

[SikIndividuoh]

so dont be jumpin to conclusions

Folks...I'm Bay Area born & raised for 28 years in this savagery...I know wussup in Richmond so don't think I need Turf Education 101. I know wussup in this whole m.f. That don't change the fact that the flick you used is not worthy of a cover. If someone DIDN'T know the Rich & they seen that pick...that's what they might think. Period. That's the facts, you don't have to like'em, you just gotta choose wether you want to use the comments to piss you off or to help make it tighter.

Regards

 

[Dr. Luni]

hey i aint pissed at nuthin im jus tryna make this cover tighter

 

[Dr. Luni]

like what kinda font would be good for this cover

 

[Juan Million]

It's gonna take way more than a good font to save this cover from it's dullness.

 

[Dr. Luni]

hey im usin adobe photoshop elements 2.0 this is my first cover

 

[SikIndividuoh]

That is your first mistake comrade. Gotta upgrade to PhotoShop.

You may want to consider hitting up EvilWayz. For a small cost he can lace your boots with everything you need.

Regards

 

[Dr. Luni]

aight