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Apr 14, 2006
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But can he spit that shit and sound legitimate... Id like to hear some of your shit Neb


some other great Tech multis..

This is the beginnin of blingin and houses and women
Welcoming angels and demons on couches and sinnin'
Im alive and well, the demised will bring ghost stories
When I arrive in hell, the alive will still vote for me

You better KNEEL when you hear a nigga thats REAL I FEEL 18 when I bust from the GRILL
because "If you keep it YOUNG" your song is always SUNG so street life taught me to keep em SPRUNG
God sent me to KILL, LYRICAL SCRIPTS the MIRACLE WHIPPED you demons and haters who TRIPPED
Listen I really FEEL my villain T WILL when he SPIT
Fuck them plus anybody they go GET
...cause you can pray and pray for my downfall...

Nice!
 
Jun 9, 2007
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#48
OK... I think there's a few people here confused on what constitutues a solid rhyme pattern and use of multis, so I'll throw in my two cents...

I think the main thing with multis that you wanna look for is complexity while maintaining a sense of purpose...

Example #1: This is something Tech and many other rappers fall into every so often with their rhymes. Using simplistic words too often in creating multis is usually the sign of a beginning writer, but is also often a sign of laziness in those who have credible writing talent but fall into that trap.

The example of Tech where he spits the rhyme "lyrical scripts / miracle whipped"... because lyrical / miracle is one of the oldest, most often used rhymes in hip-hop, I wouldn't for one second consider that a quality example to give to somebody who isn't familiar with Tech's work in trying to make a case for his multis being some of the best... however, the example "ghost stories / vote for me," being only 3 syllables compared to 4 for "lyrical scripts / miracle whipped," is actually a better example because Tech switched it up and didn't rely on simplistic rhymes.

Example #2: Relying on a suffix too often in a multisyllablic rhyme pattern detracts from the complexity and creates a monotonous rhyme. This is something Tech doesn't do too often, but alot of rappers do. For example, a rhyme like "blastin technicians / trackin my missions"... stuff like that, shit that relies upon a suffix to hold together the multisyllable scheme, is shit that I toss to the side with a grain of salt because it's way too simplistic...


I also found this interesting:


Yo
We can be close homie my arms they liberate me crazy
Baby yo why did thou create thee
I’m a little to the left
I am the incredible hetero devil
Your mother and your chick looking edible
That is always on my mind (what fuck, yeah yeah fuck)
If you in my way you getting bucked (yeah, yeah buck)
And I don't mean bucked from a horse
7 29 liftin' niggas up but of course
Sick in the cerebellum nigga your chick give me cerebellum
He tripped than you better tell him I mash shit
blast it at last he gon' get his ass kicked
Really fast quick get his ass kicked
I'm on a dead man project with prozak
Atcha doormat don't treat a killer like co-jack, bitch
Sometimes I feel the need to plead me self liberate may lord because I need help

The cerebellum scheme is mad clean. Not too many cats hit multies with THAT many syllables.
I have to toss most of this to the side when it comes to multis because it's two-syllable rhyming with simplistic words... however, "chick give me cerebellum / tripped than you better tell him" is solid... careful when pointing out rhymes where alot of the same words are used to complete a multi, that's also a sign of laziness... When I see consistent use of at least three-syllable multis throughout a rhyme that's not too simplistic, I consider it a solid rhyme scheme... but when you can combine 6, 7, even 8 syllables and have it sound legitimate and not nonsensical, you've got something special... anybody can do it, it just takes some practice... example, here's an excerpt from a weed song I did 8 years ago:

Packin-a-bowl-of-that-nuggety-shit while I'm laughin-and-rollin-another-to-hit// in my class-twelve-years-old-I-was-already-ripped// lookin mashed-I-was-totally-under-the-in-fluence...

combining 10-syllable multis in a pattern while not sacrificing content... yeah it's not the deepest rhyme in the world, but it doesn't have to be, it's about weed... the pattern and complexity of the rhyme scheme makes up for the subject matter being one of the most common things in hip-hop...

So yeah, Tech is someone who I consider, on an overall level, to have a better grasp on constructing a dope rhyme scheme than most other rappers... I just think if you're going to point out some of his best, do him justice and don't point out shit that's just average.

:)
 
Mar 12, 2006
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#49
OK... I think there's a few people here confused on what constitutues a solid rhyme pattern and use of multis, so I'll throw in my two cents...

I think the main thing with multis that you wanna look for is complexity while maintaining a sense of purpose...

Example #1: This is something Tech and many other rappers fall into every so often with their rhymes. Using simplistic words too often in creating multis is usually the sign of a beginning writer, but is also often a sign of laziness in those who have credible writing talent but fall into that trap.

The example of Tech where he spits the rhyme "lyrical scripts / miracle whipped"... because lyrical / miracle is one of the oldest, most often used rhymes in hip-hop, I wouldn't for one second consider that a quality example to give to somebody who isn't familiar with Tech's work in trying to make a case for his multis being some of the best... however, the example "ghost stories / vote for me," being only 3 syllables compared to 4 for "lyrical scripts / miracle whipped," is actually a better example because Tech switched it up and didn't rely on simplistic rhymes.

Example #2: Relying on a suffix too often in a multisyllablic rhyme pattern detracts from the complexity and creates a monotonous rhyme. This is something Tech doesn't do too often, but alot of rappers do. For example, a rhyme like "blastin technicians / trackin my missions"... stuff like that, shit that relies upon a suffix to hold together the multisyllable scheme, is shit that I toss to the side with a grain of salt because it's way too simplistic...


I also found this interesting:




I have to toss most of this to the side when it comes to multis because it's two-syllable rhyming with simplistic words... however, "chick give me cerebellum / tripped than you better tell him" is solid... careful when pointing out rhymes where alot of the same words are used to complete a multi, that's also a sign of laziness... When I see consistent use of at least three-syllable multis throughout a rhyme that's not too simplistic, I consider it a solid rhyme scheme... but when you can combine 6, 7, even 8 syllables and have it sound legitimate and not nonsensical, you've got something special... anybody can do it, it just takes some practice... example, here's an excerpt from a weed song I did 8 years ago:

Packin-a-bowl-of-that-nuggety-shit while I'm laughin-and-rollin-another-to-hit// in my class-twelve-years-old-I-was-already-ripped// lookin mashed-I-was-totally-under-the-in-fluence...

combining 10-syllable multis in a pattern while not sacrificing content... yeah it's not the deepest rhyme in the world, but it doesn't have to be, it's about weed... the pattern and complexity of the rhyme scheme makes up for the subject matter being one of the most common things in hip-hop...

So yeah, Tech is someone who I consider, on an overall level, to have a better grasp on constructing a dope rhyme scheme than most other rappers... I just think if you're going to point out some of his best, do him justice and don't point out shit that's just average.

:)
good post bro.

question though, for your example number #2 when you say relying upon a suffix..

"blastin technicians / trackin my missions"...

would MY be the suffix, is this what you mean?
 
Jun 9, 2007
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oh haha i got you..

but if the suffix was taking off, but the same words used would this still be considered simple??

It depends on the context...

"blastin my technique / rash in my left cheek"

see, that's not "simple"

but when relying upon a suffix to complete multis, that's simplifying things, and just lazy

get it?
 
Mar 12, 2006
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#54
It depends on the context...

"blastin my technique / rash in my left cheek"

see, that's not "simple"

but when relying upon a suffix to complete multis, that's simplifying things, and just lazy

get it?
I started this thread to teach my friend and ended up learning something myself..

thanks man, I got it..

so with all this said, which tech lines really stand out to you then?
 
Jun 9, 2007
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#55
What comes to ming right away (probably because I've been listenin to Killer more than any other Tech shit lately) is:

but just know your hip will not stop the hop
cause when you look at the big picture, my block pops alot daily
so keep on thinking my clock stops the shots
and I can quickly bury you in your Osh Kosh B'Gosh, baby
That's good shit right there... 4-6-4-6 pattern, and of course he made it sound dope

the verse Poisoned Yam, I mean Deadly Potato posted from "Breathe" was solid too... consistent 3 syllable pattern and not overly simplistic...

there's others I can't think of right now, but yeah that shit from Crybaby, as of right now, is what stands out to me as the best example of Tech's multi usage (even tho he used "stop" twice, lol)
 
Jan 20, 2007
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#56
To expand on what Nebulizah said, I think part of what usually constitutes a good multi is breaking the rhyming syllable into a different number of words. ie gory sight, story might would be better as gory night/ pour me ice. Those are poor examples, but when the words are phonetically rhyming, but not in a written sense. Anybody can paste similar words together, but to stretch rhyming syllables into a separate verbal structure while maintaining the integrity of the rhyme itself is more impressive.

He cited my example of multies as poor, and I must concede to his point. It was one of those verses where when you go back and look at it, it wasn't quite as dope as you remember it sounding. lol Tech is one of those rappers that often sound better than their verses look. Some are the opposite, like King Gordy imo.
 
Jun 9, 2007
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To expand on what Nebulizah said, I think part of what usually constitutes a good multi is breaking the rhyming syllable into a different number of words. ie gory sight, story might would be better as gory night/ pour me ice. Those are poor examples, but when the words are phonetically rhyming, but not in a written sense. Anybody can paste similar words together, but to stretch rhyming syllables into a separate verbal structure while maintaining the integrity of the rhyme itself is more impressive.
That's a valid point and I'm glad you mentioned it. I was gonna cite something similar after the "lyrical miracle" thing but I got wrapped up in all sorts of other shit, lol
 
Mar 12, 2006
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To expand on what Nebulizah said, I think part of what usually constitutes a good multi is breaking the rhyming syllable into a different number of words. ie gory sight, story might would be better as gory night/ pour me ice. Those are poor examples, but when the words are phonetically rhyming, but not in a written sense. Anybody can paste similar words together, but to stretch rhyming syllables into a separate verbal structure while maintaining the integrity of the rhyme itself is more impressive.

He cited my example of multies as poor, and I must concede to his point. It was one of those verses where when you go back and look at it, it wasn't quite as dope as you remember it sounding. lol Tech is one of those rappers that often sound better than their verses look. Some are the opposite, like King Gordy imo.
I feel ya, I think its the way tech emphasizes his rhymes or the way he spits them that make his multis stand out to me more than others perhaps, It just seems to me he is consistently throwing them in as opposed to other rappers

Man only a handful of people around here know something about lyrics. I get crucified everytime I mention Tech being lazy with his rhymes.
I really don't know about calling tech lazy with his rhymes though, because the way he actually spits them and the energy behind him usually says more than the words themselves which is something I've always kinda liked, does that make any sense?

However, I completely agree with you that only a handful of people really get lyrics. I've only begun to scratch the surface on understanding rhyme schemes and the works, but I've made an effort. The majority of rap fans are simply listening to words on a beat and don't really analyze the set-up of it all... Sometimes when something is really complex it goes right over their head when I'm like "holy shit, did you hear that??"