Flyer for transportation company I done did

[Global Graffiti]

here's a flyer I did for a transportation company, please critique

Thanks

 

[7-HOE-7]

that is nice and clean.. nice colors they really stand out.. good job

 

[SPORADIC]

Thats skills

Yo,that is the perfect flyer.Very clean & professional..Good job.....

 

[Fawg]

Nice

 

[kulif]

nice work, only thing that bugs me abit is the fading of the blur by the C on Majestic, but real tite other than that

pz..

 

[TONY206]

Re: Thats skills

Yo,that is the perfect flyer.Very clean & professional..Good job.....

 

[Psilo707]

hell yeah thats hella sick, nice job

 

[Global Graffiti]

Thanks for the feedback fellas, much appreciated.

 

[Cmoke]

Clean shit i like that one.....real nice for promotion

 

[D-Skrilla]

That's cold.

 

[JIM HAT]

Perfect!

 

[Global Graffiti]

I like that vector look of Tio Samuel, azios! Is that from clip art, or did you give him that cel shaded look??

You got a price list you can e-mail me on the printing mane?

 

[Global Graffiti]

not as wack as how busy I've been since I've came back. Design & Furniture been booming. I haven't had time to chill because something always pops up. I got your digits, so I'll holla when things start to settle down.

 

[Global Graffiti]

yea, ok.. I'm fool of shiyaaatttt then. I'll be going yah.. yah.. yah.. to the bank, that's for sure!

 

[Global Graffiti]

why you gotta hate for? just because I didn't do your site? it's all good though, shit doesn't fade me at all. peace.

 

[Global Graffiti]

that was over a year ago when I had my own company and I found out about you through DopeHouse Records. so I e-mailed and said what's up on me reselling your designs? Then you replied and I thought to myself who the fuck is this crazy motherfucker typing like a dumbass, and making sure every punctuation mark is typed four times !!!! .... ????

LOL

So I wanted to see if you'd be willing to do designs for clients I would be getting, and I even offered to do your site so maybe you could hook me up with tight pricing. You offered the logo, I didn't beg for shit.

Fatass? LOL, last time I checked you were the fat motherfucker always bitching about something. BOOOOYYYYEEEE!!!!

I rest my motherfucking case.

 

[Global Graffiti]

I was born and raised in the ghetto of 5th ward northside houston, and now I'm whitebread because I've moved out to 1960 area? I'm not a man? ok you the big man talking about people's mommas! You crack me up. Just because I'm 20 and I'm doing big things makes me a target for the haters, it's all good man I'm already used to it. have a good weekend

 

[SikIndividuoh]

Not feeling how the word "solutions" crosses into the graphic...creates clutter. By using only one model of earth I think you would've accomplished the same idea...the multiple usage of it doesn't seem to serve a purpose. The design just kind of looks like it is suffocating with everything being so close together...a bit more room on the edges & between the graphics & text. Space is a designer's friend. Hope that helps....if not....At least you have an honest critique.

Regards

 

[Global Graffiti]

Not feeling how the word "solutions" crosses into the graphic...creates clutter. By using only one model of earth I think you would've accomplished the same idea...the multiple usage of it doesn't seem to serve a purpose. The design just kind of looks like it is suffocating with everything being so close together...a bit more room on the edges & between the graphics & text. Space is a designer's friend. Hope that helps....if not....At least you have an honest critique.

Regards

Good lookin out Sik, I'll keep those tips in mind from now on. Thanks!

 

[JESTER]

i thought is was a cool design....but why did u choose black as the background-->usually corropoations perfer a different color because black usuallly has a negitive connotation.