Felony Ent..........Welcome to my city...Sporadic Version...

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Some Random Asshole
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the effects behind the text take away from the background and make it less clear.....it's cooh thought.....just my 206 cents...
 
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Thanks for the feedback fellaz...I'm appreciative
Yeah sixxness...I feel you bro...But when I sat the text up their alone it just didn't sit right..It was too lonely.I feel the little thingy I put behind their brought much emphasis towards the text and also kept consistent with the overall image....Peep the loneliness I'm talkin bout......
 

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Some Random Asshole
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i see your point....but maybe less of the shit behind it.....you could have some....just not as much and would probably do the trick...
 
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That looks nice. Its not a 2 color job, but you could save money anyway but getting it output on a digital press. The welcome to my city is kinda hard to read but don't change that, it looks grat, maybe try to fade the background just a tad.
 
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Thanks for the feedback everyone......
EW..That was originally my idea to go back to the original text but I got lost and ended up sticking with the text I got..I think its well optimized though......I dont know why I've been having the urge to always throw skulls in my images lately...Everytime I think these days,its something sinister.........................

Thanks everyone for their feedback...I'm appreciative........1
 
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Here's the revision the way YK wanted it with the offset but consistent 'the last chapter' text.......Didn't feel like going through the process of changing the to to a 2 since I went through all them filters (Can't edit text when filter is applied)......But just in case mine is chosen....I'll make the changes accordingly..........1