CHECK OUT MY TRACKZ N LET ME KNO WAT YALL THINK

[LiL LoC 415]

THERE MY FIRST TRACKZ RECORDED ALONG WIT MY HOMIE B.M.K. LET ME KNO WAT YALL THINK N WAT I CAN IMPROVE ON..MUCH LOVE
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[MobMuzic707]

ILL CHECK IT OUT TONIGHT HOMEBOY.

 

[Young M]

Ill check it out after work homie

 

[mackinainteasy]

same sucka^^

 

[LiL LoC 415]

IGHT GOOD LOOKIN YALL

 

[antoniog831]

so far have only heard sounds of 415, shits cool.... i'll listen to the rest later, but keep up the good work

 

[LiL LoC 415]

so far have only heard sounds of 415, shits cool.... i'll listen to the rest later, but keep up the good work

FA SHO APPRECIATE THE SUPPORT HOMIE..

 

[LiL LoC 415]

56 viewz and only 6 replys?? jus drop a line on wat yall think n i would appreciate that

 

[Young M]

Yo shit dope homie ill hit yo up when i get back to the bay if you interested in work with an SJ cat

 

[LiL LoC 415]

Yo shit dope homie ill hit yo up when i get back to the bay if you interested in work with an SJ cat

ALWAYZ DOWN TO COLLAB FA SHO GET AT ME HOMIE

 

[siccness-user]

i think you need a lot of work,


you got a couple of years ahead of you

 

[LiL LoC 415]

^^^^IGHT CAN U BE MORE SPECIFIC THO ON WAT I NEED TO IMPROVE ON???

 

[VERSACERO]

Shit soundz koo homie that ride mudafucka beat soundz like the one on blockmade
but good shit keep doin it

 

[LiL LoC 415]

FA SHO HOMIE

 

[SC_408]

i think you need a lot of work,


you got a couple of years ahead of you

c/s

 

[LiL LoC 415]

^^I APPRECIATE YALL FEEDBACK BUT UR NOT BEIN SPECIFIC ON WAT I CAN DO BETTER CUZ IF U JUS SAYIN U DNT LIKE IT THEN U EITHER DNT KNO ANYTHING ABOUT WAT UR SAYIN OR UR JUS HATIN' SO BE SPECIFIC

 

[siccness-user]

there's not enough passion, you rapped about killing, but i didnt feel like killing anybody as i heard it,

plus your voice is out of tune, and then you ran out of breath or some something,

you're not on the beat, not much rythm
that beat is pretty whack,

and your style sounds kinda played out, like some old x-raided


*all imo status

 

[DAT NIGGA TAZZ]

the shit is pretty coo for your first shit... the lyrics are alright, the beats r coo. u could practice ur delivery, maybe a better mic. like sometimes when u rap u sound like u nervous, u gotta get that energy a lil more. but not bad at all, u could improve yea but it sounds aight. better than most rappers' first time

 

[antoniog831]

not sounding natural imo

 

[YUNG $PIDER]

HONESTLY, JUST CANT STAND YOUR VOICE. NOT HATING JUST A SERIOUS OPINION