can i ask yall somethin?

[rhymatic]

yea wut up. i juss finished spittin a verse for my lil brother for his song he doin for a science project. can yall check it let me kno if it works for what he doin.
also can yall let me kno if yall like how i spit.
he on the hook and the 1st verse im on 2nd verse
Atoms - (Science Project)
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4806095&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4806095&q=hi

 

[rhymatic]

man 15 views and no replies. can i get some feed please?

 

[rhymatic]

^^

 

[Romanowski21]

coo beaty, thats science project worth the effort......nice approach

 

[rhymatic]

thanks for checkin it man. im tryin to see what all yall think man good or bad.
my lil bro on the hook and 1st verse - 13 Years old me on the 2nd verse - 15 years old. let me kno what yall think

 

[usernamex]

putting a dick in your mouth while you rap isnt going to make you sound gangsta.

 

[rhymatic]

putting a dick in your mouth while you rap isnt going to make you sound gangsta.

and i don kno how old you are but im guessin your 20+ and i gotta say pickin on 15 year old make you REAAAAAALLLL gangsta man. im glad i dont claim.

 

[rhymatic]

im tryin to see what all yall think man good or bad.
my lil bro on the hook and 1st verse - 13 Years old me on the 2nd verse - 15 years old. let me kno what yall think

^^^^

 

[timebomb]

putting a dick in your mouth while you rap isnt going to make you sound gangsta.

^^^wtf is wid the gay shit mayne to a lil kid bruh?

 

[Rapmoney sfc]

DO YO THANG FAM

 

[rhymatic]

damn if i made a thread on how Luda shouted out the 415 in "Area Codes" i would of already had way more replies wassup wit yall.

 

[|GOD|||ZILLA|]

the first verse needs to be redone.. i can't understand what the fuck he's sayin'.

 

[infinity]

coo beat...its aight for a science project

 

[SC_408]

putting a dick in your mouth while you rap isnt going to make you sound gangsta.

LOL THATS FUCKED UP....

 

[usernamex]

and i don kno how old you are but im guessin your 20+ and i gotta say pickin on 15 year old make you REAAAAAALLLL gangsta man. im glad i dont claim.

my bad, just the first verse by vanilla ice was annoying.

 

[rhymatic]

aight so now i kno yadont like the 1st verse

what about the 2nd verse?

 

[Gemini]

I got to say it was tight.

See, MoFo's don't understand that it's not something to bump in the ride or play in the club, but something to help your brother in his school work.

Most try & make a hit to gain fame & money, you just helped make something to gain your little brother's education...

And that within it self, is hella tight.


Trust your little Bro will not an F in that class.

 

[rhymatic]

I got to say it was tight.

See, MoFo's don't understand that it's not something to bump in the ride or play in the club, but something to help your brother in his school work.

And that within it self, is hella tight.

yea man i think people were thinkin this was supposed to be a "Bump in the Trunk" type of track. all they think of is "Why would someone rap about atoms?" they can see past the fact that its for a school project.

good look on the feed tho mane.
good looks to all you that heard it too.

anyone else what yall think of the 2nd verse?

 

[rhymatic]

re-up like eminem

 

[rhymatic]

aight so now i kno yadont like the 1st verse

what about the 2nd verse?

anyone?