before and after

[Swishersplitter]

This is the picture I took:

And this is a first draft on a cover for a single some folx of mine are puttin out. Still workin on it, but let me get some feedback. What do you think of the color changes I made?

 

[Kavie]

i'm feelin it...that shit is tight...

 

[TONY206]

that is tight! nice job

 

[kulif]

looks coo, much better
but i don think u should use that pose for a cd cover cuz they dont look relaxed enough, the pose looks kinda forced where there arms are

pz..

 

[3deanhg]

i dug that

 

[Juan Million]

That's tight Swish. Nice work. The only changes I would suggest are blend the bricks a little better cause I can see the different layers(especially since ya cut the guy's elbow off) and see about takin off that blue line on the left side.

 

[Swishersplitter]

lol, I was wonderin if anyone would notice the bricks or his elbow, leave it to another GD to see somthin like that (Juan). I didn't want the brick wall to seem flat, but your right I still have to work on blending it a little better. And I got no idea where that blue line came from, lol. Thanks folx, appreciate the feedback.

The pose was their idea, but I'll let them know what you said kulif. I'll post up another version when I get some more done on it.

 

[Juan Million]

I'm a graphic critic...nothin gets past these eyes. Maybe it would look extra sick if you added a big 2 behind them so it looks like it was grafittied on the wall.

 

[Swishersplitter]

i updated it if any body is wondering what Juan was talking about

 

[TONY206]

that update is tight! im lovin the II

 

[Juan Million]

That's tight.

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

looks good.. Got anything we can peep of them?

 

[Swishersplitter]

Biggz

I got a sample audio track in the audio section of www.70savage.com and the dude on the right I did his website and he has a sample on there www.javahn.com

 

[EvilWayz]

great Job Swish...........im diggin how u turnd tha brick wall into the roman numeral 2............the text is great, really has a 24k look to it.....

 

[noWetaG]

im diggin how u turnd tha brick wall into the roman numeral 2

good work SWISH....

 

[Upheaval]

great Job Swish...........im diggin how u turnd tha brick wall into the roman numeral 2............the text is great, really has a 24k look to it.....

im feelin it, even the text is cool.

 

[Chaos]

hella coo mane, hella coo...you did a hella nice job on it the way you changed the coloring and i like the text