A MOMENT
- Thread starter KRYSI-31007
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Not surprised? I know what culture is. And my culture is the Mexican culture senorita. I was just wondering how a culture could be derived in the society we live in today. That´s all. And you make it seem like there is only one culture and that´s it, well there are many different cultures. And I just wanted to know which culture you based your poetry on.
HIS PRESENCE LINGERS HERE
LIKE GUILT DOES IN A SORRY CONSCIENCE
LAYING ON MY BED
WATCHING THE SHADOWS ON THE WALL
WISHING, HOPING ONE WOULD TAKE YOUR SHAPE
BRING TO FRUITION WHAT MY SOUL CRAVES
RELEASE ME FROM THIS HELL THAT NOW IS REALITY
IF ONLY FOR A MOMENT
( unless this was written for Osama Bin Laden....lmao )
LIKE GUILT DOES IN A SORRY CONSCIENCE
LAYING ON MY BED
WATCHING THE SHADOWS ON THE WALL
WISHING, HOPING ONE WOULD TAKE YOUR SHAPE
BRING TO FRUITION WHAT MY SOUL CRAVES
RELEASE ME FROM THIS HELL THAT NOW IS REALITY
IF ONLY FOR A MOMENT
( unless this was written for Osama Bin Laden....lmao )
You know what, I´m gonna be real with you. I´m not one to tell someone their poems arent good or whether they are culturally aware or whatever. But, the way you´re posting on this forum just makes people not take you serious at all. You´re really making yourself look like we see you, and maybe you should change your post-whorish ways. Just a though, and I´m trying to save you.
