young acer tryin to get some feed bacc

[Acer]

Its young acer out for fame.../
if this was a battle it would be your-loss and my-gain.../
murder your career like cuttin your lyrical vien.../
all a sudden you loose your brain.../
you cant obtain but still you strain.../
now i got your punk ass on a chain.../
and you steady obey-in../ -my every wish.../
now i got this bitch eatin out a dish.../
go MOB and have you swimmin wit tha fish.../
ima make ya wish u didnt start this shit.../
cause i neva hesitate to run up and SLAP A BITCH!!!


lookin for some feed bacc ima rookie so it would be appriciated

one-

 

[Acer]

heres another one please critisize it!



picture me rollin n tha second generation.../
with so much excelleration.../
when i roll up to the line im givin you due compensation.../
cause what ur facin is serious so wahts ur expectation.../
see my girl drop her arms with no hesitation.../
then its off if u aint got that picture-yeah where racin.../
my car aint got no decoration ist just strait dedication.../
at the finish line it aint nothin celebration and clownin.../
and thats why I gots ta win cause its ether me or him.../
and i dont sink i swim.../
so theres no choice.../
like pussy when its moist im in it to win it and thats all.../
thats why im always off tha line like a connon ball.../
and ur car was the one that got recalled.../
so withdraw unless ur car is raw.../
and it sounds like u have a few flaws.../
so dont try.../
dont make me identify.../
why we name our selves OUTSTRIP its cuz we quick shift.../
in our quick whips.../
always with a few chicks that like to dip hard and go fast.../
ur bitch is givin up no ass.../
like a car with no gas.../
and even if she was ur shit might get hard but it wont last!!!



kinda inpired by street racing and outstrip is our racing krew just to fill in tha blanks

one~

 

[BAMMER]

coo,but you need to add more double and triple syllable words

maintain
insane
octane
overcame
etc....

n/m just read the 2nd one...good shit

 

[Acer]

yeah i read some other post from rookies and the biggest problem they had was using more than one syllable so i spit the second one right after so see waht i could come up with

thanx for the feed bacc dogg

one luv~