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[JLMACN]

i know im a beginer to flow but im a vett at heart// throw a verse or 2 at you // watch you run while you fart // no jokes just real chop thats all ill speak// and ill be on this side of the comp lift'n my hand sayin "im the champ every week"// am i ready for SEAK, MR.FUCKYOU or any other dude?// not sayin i got the killa flow but i could lyrically molest foo's // its hard i know you all gonna front// like "Whos this dude that wants to come to us and stunt?"// but it aint like that//just tired of seein the same-ol-cats// got good flow but prolly never lifted a steel crome gat// yet they rap about it//just like its a everyday habit//see what happens when you come at me with elementry lines.....all you'll see is a LOL.....that means im laughin at IT......-jlmacn


just some shit off the dome....

 

[Greg Double]

aight homie.. stay up, but dont ever use the word FART in a rhyme again.. you know you could think of something betta than that .. thats why aint nobody respondin to you mayne, cuz basically your flows suck fuckin ass.. not hopeless, but definately elementary.. considerin its "off the dome" i spose you put some decent rhymes together at the end there.. aight, thats just me tho mayne.. paece

 

[JLMACN]

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i can take that...
thanks for makin it constructive....

5000

 

[FATAL NYGHTMARE]

see what happens when you come at me with elementry lines.....all you'll see is a LOL.....that means im laughin at IT......

and im laughin at your flow. LOL.

i saw no sick linez but you can work on it and probably become a good lyricist. it just takez practice.

 

[JLMACN]

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thanks bro....
ima keep tryin...
ill be compete'n soon...
this was just somethin i put right off my head...
it would have been much better if i thought about it and wrote...

5000

 

[FATAL NYGHTMARE]

off tha dome huh? that'z koo, but i do everything off tha dome so.... itz nothing special. keept it up tho.