Touch Me, Quick Verse...

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Jul 7, 2005
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Soon, Our Names Will be Played N Known To The Masses/
Explode wit This Rap Shit/ Unknown Is Just Past Tense/
Then, The Game Will Have Changed Cuz Our Flowin Is Mastered/
you'll Say We insane Cuz We Flow Wit A Passion/
I'm known To Be Savage/You Prone To Be Passive/
So i'm Bringin It Home Wit The Throan In My Grasp,Trick!/
Unload N I Clap Quick Clips/Known To Be Tragic,Slit/
Then I'm Flushin You Punks Just To Show You Aint Jack Shit,Bitch!/
Cold N My Raps Slick, Niggas Heartless Wit Mics/
Cuz Ya Bars Hard As Retards Startin A Fight!/
Leave Ya Black And Blue, Like I'm Switchin The Pen!/
Ink Spills Out The Grill We Still Spittin The Lead/
Splittin Ya Head Like We Aches To Ya Cranium!/
Now You Bitches Are Dead,Blazed And The Game Is Won/
Tazed N You Dames R Dumped/Get Raped Just For Playin Dumb/
Stupid/Flows Are Fluid/ Leave You Dazed N Yo Days Are Done/...
 
Jul 7, 2005
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yeah no doubt playa, i gotta, cuz music and poetry is my life in words nahmean?

if you read any of my verses you can tell i got anger and shit, but that i also aint a battle mc, i just flow mean cuz that's my mindstate...blahblahblah... i could analyze my whole style and break it down but who cares? haha... thanks for the feed dog... stay up...
 
Jul 17, 2005
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#7
Seems to me you're trying to rhyme way too often. Example:


So i'm Bringin It Home Wit The Throan In My Grasp,Trick!/
Unload N I Clap Quick Clips/Known To Be Tragic,Slit/
Then I'm Flushin You Punks Just To Show You Aint Jack Shit,Bitch!/

That basically said nothing, but it rhymed and that's obviously all you were trying to do. That's just my opinion.

Ghost