this is some of the truest shit i ever wrote, its kind of on the 'poetry' tip *peep*

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Oct 4, 2002
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Um lets see, no one has ever gotten whatever for free
my stee is to be me, that's who i am, or should i ask who am i?
been told so many lies through-out the life my eyes
... are slowly becomin blind, my opticals have the option to have optimism,
it's the criticsm that has my brain goin through nuclear fission,
I'm on a mission that is impossible to accomplish...or is it?
must be the physical that puts my stress through the test, got damn yo...are we done yet?
tryin to get the criteria met then got my feet swept,
I'm electrical current,
don't need my feet wet so I step in dry spots to keep the show down on lock,
why can't time stand still?
it seems to never stop until a life is gone or has been forgot,
I tend to drop on either or both knees prayin for
this Earthly disease to cease botherin me,
tried coppin trees but where would the smoking lead me?
Stuck questioning inquistions that would have been answered had I only listened,
now I'm fistin gristled grills with nothing but fiction....
This just in, more news inquiries burnin the crees,
these people are fleas that seem to breeze through my inner peace,
I'm fallin from center sleeves,
no one here to hold me, so what's left but
to cherish these memories?,
goin down, croakin slow, been around,
blood dries in snow, cryin everyday cuz I just didn't know...

Excuses...Excuses...

I refuse this abuse to clap loud and profuse like there's no use for my everyday juice,
I'm spruce like Bruce Bruce eatin on Comic View, now what's new?
Actually I was just about to go into obtuse angles and strangle these Mz. Bojangles,
grab em by the ankles and drank em like
I was in a Klump mini-series,
it's the mysery of this mystery that keeps gettin to me,
don't you get it?
nah never mind you'd rather fixodent and forget it,
that's why your wig stays divided, spit it just to spite it, and every word you said..let me ask you this," did you bite it?"
I'm like flight attendant jobs now...ignited....so don't fight it,
I'm blowin bits throwin em fits attempting to fix this shit,
takin high risks with both my fists...
But yo answer me this, how many people out there have a grip on their own reality?
shit I'm statin mine and every time I rhyme I'm paralyzin a spine,
it's all in body, soul and mind, I committ the crime just by recitin true lines,
keep on livin true lies, you'll catch the total back draft in true time,
it's due find, on I'm early mornin dew's chime, so feel the wind blow through each shine,
oh my...they still don't get it, maybe I should
bring this whole thing to an endin.....
Nah Nah but wait, unlock the gate cuz you're sealin the fate,
don't let it escape off cape, you be canaveral, keep your eye on the sparrow,
you know with Him, I know things seem dim,
but if you give up...what's gonna happen then?
Honestly I don't know, sometimes I don't care, I just flow words to get it off the tip of my nerves,
it seems absurd, but just obsorb the verbs and eventually you'll understand what's heard,
it's just that I can't explain,
want them to say it, but tired of people sayin my name,
and everytime I lash out I'm the one that catches the blame,
goin insane every minute I'm here, nah mean? ...........ahhhh see what I mean?
I mean can't you hear?
... dam, this is the reason I carry the fear...
 
Jun 11, 2002
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takes bout this long to understand all that....

its koo...

"Honestly I don't know, sometimes I don't care, I just flow words to get it off the tip of my nerves,
it seems absurd, but just obsorb the verbs and eventually you'll understand what's heard,
it's just that I can't explain,"

i feel like that myself somtimes. flows sometimes are a vent for my pent up aggression and frustration.