tell me who u think won this battle

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Jul 21, 2003
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killa jay -
hydro get lit up like if i was a pyro//
u die now end ur life grabe ur knife then slice//
hes like ohh shit this cat can spit//
u better checc n make sure u got a dicc//
cuz the shit u wrote made it seem like u had a clit//
in other words u spit like a bitch//
lyrics so sicc they lay u in a Cix foot ditch//
n i was put here for a reason n thats to teach u a lesson//
cuz lessons n sujustins is wat this fag hydro gets to gussen//
watch out cuz im a lethal weapon n u a 22//
n im gonna break ya wit the deadly lyrics i spit towards you//
watch this nigga get broke like a glass/ watch ur barins go splat cuz u was suprised//
that this lil nigga by the name of KILLA demallished u//
n u noe that killa got this faggit ass bitch scared to rhyme//
no WCR gangsta is scared 2 ride/ make this fag comit sucide//
so u best just member that rappin is one of my MURDERIOUS VERBIALY ATTACKS U TRICC.........

hydro-
VERSE GOES WITH IT BECAUSE IM LISTEN TA IT AS I WRITE!
(DEAD WRONG BIGGIE BEAT)
YO.....
LET ME GIVE YA A LIL BIT OF ADVICE JAY//
STOP USIN LYRICS THAT WERE NICE IN THE 2ND
GRADE//
CUZ YOULL GET SPRAYED AN LAY DEAD IN THE RIVA//
EVERYONE CALL ME HYDRO YOU CALL ME MISTA//
YOU BOUT TA FEEL THE REAPERS CORE//
THE ONLY REASON YOURE HERE IS CUZ YA MA WAS THE CHEAPER WHORE//
YES U HAVE NO IDEA WHATS IN STORE//
WIT THE BLOOD AND THE GORE THATLL LEAVE YA ON YA FLOOR//
AND NOONE ON THIS SIGHT CAN PHANTHOM//
WHAT WOULD HAPPEN IF WE TOOK TO A MIC AND STARTED REALLY RAPPIN//
CUZ YA CANT MAINTAIN THE SAME PACE TA FAME//
ILL PULL YA THROUGH YA COMPUTER AND TEAR OUT YA BRAIN//
IF NOT I'LL KEEP IT HERE AND SHIT ON YA NAME//
TAKE YA YOUNG ASS TA BOOTCAMP TA TRAIN//
KILLED JAY EVRYONE STOPS IN SHOCKED//
THE ONLY REASON YA HERE IS CUZ I DIDNT GET COCK BLOCKED//
 
Apr 23, 2003
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well.. most of your lines didn't even rhyme.. you had no flow whatsoever..

other dude was trash too.. lol@ biggie beat. wtf? text is text..


if i were to choose a winner.. i'd choose hydro.. at least he rhymed his lines..

just work on structure.. and not writing lines the you know can not fit when rapping out loud.. like. if you recorded this.. you wouldn't be able to spit it cuz there's no flow..

peace.