This is some of the worst distasteful work I've seen in a long time. You should practice your craft more, and try another attempt, if you really do care about your own work, by the looks of it you don't. You should care about every piece of work you do, don't just think of it as your clients, but yours too, because it is, everytime you design something and put it out there you are representing yourself, so don't be sloppy, put in the time and effort. I'm sure with practice and time you will gain a style worth showing off, but personally this isn't working, try harder and go back to the drawing board.