I have been seriously considering sending a demo to Strange Music for quite some time now, but have always been hesitant. I am posting this song to you all because we post here each and every day and I am curious as to what you all think. Is this a song I should put on my demo or not...
I value your opinions and feedback and if are willing to give it. I know a demo should have no more than 4 or 5 songs on it and I figured this track would be perfect because it's a true story and displays my storytelling abilities.
Not trying to promote myself in anyway, I just want your opinions/advice.
-MK
Madison Kaine - Devil On My Shoulder .mp3 - 3.08MB
Here are the lyrics in case you are interested:
Madison Kaine – Devil On My Shoulder
Have you ever
Fell victim
To a vixen
The devil in disguise
Hook:
Devil on my shoulder
Heart is getting colder
Think you’ll get away from me
But bitch you’re going no where
Look into my eyes now
Think you better lie down
Fore’ I get my knife out
Sorry but it’s lights out
Verse 1:
I hang with girls who do pills and much coke
They love dope, for real, but still I fuck hoes
I meet em in the street, at a show or party
And even some hippie bitches who know I’m narley
I take em to the spot so they can do what it does
The only stipulation is you don’t screw up they buzz
They wanna take advantage of me so they threw me some drugs
I never woulda got involved if I knew what it was
What it is – is a trip ta hell
You do this with them but don’t kiss and tell
And you never talk about who sniffs and sells
The only time you talk about it’s when you visit the devil
So I pick up a shovel and bury my own grave
I got a bad bitch on my side, wanna get high okay
And then she looked me in the eye like she’s a psycho-hey
I only wanted to fuck I don’t wanna die- no way
Hook:
Devil on my shoulder
Heart is getting colder
Think you’ll get away from me
But bitch you’re going no where
Look into my eyes now
Think you better lie down
Fore’ I get my knife out
Sorry but it’s lights out
Verse 2:
With a chick and we walk in the house
I see some Oxy Cotton droppin poppin off at the couch
She introduced me to her friend her name was Stacy Marie
Gave me a shot of Hennessy and started blazing some weed
Before I did I popped a pill so I could switch the pace
We started blazing but I guarantee that shit was laced
Took me to the back room for a tab of acid
Said I like your shirt I said thanks it matches the hat bitch
Ten minutes hasn’t passed and I’m mad lit
I said my name was Madison, I rap and I’m that sick
She said she wanna fuck, I got a Magnum out of the package
And strapped it on and had her flat on the mattress
Got my nut then I dipped for more weed
Which cup is mine, I must have sipped like fourteen
My friend says hey you wanna hit some Morphine
I said no way I’m gonna sit with Courtney
Take a look and there’s so many mother fuckers around her
Everybody’s on an upper or downer
Plus there’s hella people fiddilin with Riddlin, and pills and such
I’m so numb, can’t even feel my nuts
What a night it was, I got my high and buzz
I had a bitch up on me, wasn’t even tryin’ta fuck
And then I take a look at Stacy, she was jealous in the eyes
Shoulda known the whole time she was the devil in disguise
Hook:
Devil on my shoulder
Heart is getting colder
Think you’ll get away from me
But bitch you’re going no where
Look into my eyes now
Think you better lie down
Fore’ I get my knife out
Sorry but it’s lights out
We all got a devil inside
So much shit I think about
I could never describe
You tell by the look in my eyes
If you wanna find out you’ll be dead if you try
One of the other tracks I was going to put on the demo was to demonstrate more of relaxed type of song, but still with raw and complex lyrics.
Madison Kaine - I_m Fucking Hoes.mp3 - 3.68MB
Madison Kaine - I'm Fucking Hoes
Hook:
When you see me and I’m bustin flows
See my enemies but im duckin’ foes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes.
Yeah
Verse:
Call me Mr. Kaine I’m sick it’s plain to see
Ya bitch is angry
So don’t be mad your chick just came to me
So sit and take a sit and listen play the beat
And if you diss and hate on me
I’ll have you missin, basically you aint shit
What a site to see, I gotta pipe with weed
You wanna sniff some coke
Then here’s a line from me
Do some blow on the counter
Here’s a hoe I just found her
She was walking and I saw her all alone up on Gower Street
Now she’s texting me hourly
Asking me how are we
Have some hot sex on the couch
And then can we take a shower please
Now ya leave
Can I have a Valium please
I don’t know what this gal is thinking
Just because I got weed and pills
Ya need ta chill
I love you but that’s only how my penis feels
I’ve got the meanest flows, but
The demon don’t, need a hoe
Leave the door, please just go
Slut
Hook:
When you see me and I’m bustin flows
See my enemies but im duckin’ foes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes.
Yeah
Verse 2:
Watch ya back in Los Angeles
These dog’s scandalous
Hollywood, I cannot stand a bitch
Californ-ia I’m in the city of angles
On my mind everyday is always titties and pain pills
Ya meet this one chick
Ya sleep with some bitch
Ya skeet then come quick
Ya leave then some shit pops off
Because she wanna be ya favorite
Keep your feelings to yourself
It aint my job to save a bitch
Who you know as sick
With flows legit
Who goes and get
Hoes and chicks
To grope his dick
Smoke and sniff blow
And hits dro
Sips Patron
Slit cha throat
Split cha dome
Ya trip ya go
Better get away from me before I snap
Imma bad
Mother fucker you can get it if you want it
Better know that I’m mad
Madison Kaine
Better get up out of my way
Before I
Go get a gun
And put a mother fucking bullet in the back of ya brain
Yeah
Hook:
When you see me and I’m bustin flows
See my enemies but im duckin’ foes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes.
Yeah
Verse 3:
Quit the cheap talk
Let’s dip to me spot
Then rip them jeans off
And sip some cheap vodka
Kaine is elegant, well equipped
Stays with hella chicks
Blazed I’m hella lit
Never a day that I say I’m celibate
Everything that you say is irrelevant
Chillin with a chick and then I hit it from the back
And then I guarantee ya bitch you gonna love that
I don’t even know her but im fucking like a maniac
And now I got a bitch up on my nut sack
Wow
She like my style and swag
Give the bitches my digits so they can dial me back
Maddy
Just because I gave her my phone number
I don’t love her
She’s so stubborn
She told me to fuck her with no rubber
Hoe what are you crazy
You wanna have a baby
So when im rich and famous I can buy you another Mercedez
Now your mother is hating me
Basically, they think they should be dating me
Making me agry, baby please, shady things
Make me mad, so please be gone
And if you think you feel the same way
You should sing the song
Get it on
Hook:
When you see me and I’m bustin flows
See my enemies but im duckin’ foes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes.
Yeah
I value your opinions and feedback and if are willing to give it. I know a demo should have no more than 4 or 5 songs on it and I figured this track would be perfect because it's a true story and displays my storytelling abilities.
Not trying to promote myself in anyway, I just want your opinions/advice.
-MK
Madison Kaine - Devil On My Shoulder .mp3 - 3.08MB
Here are the lyrics in case you are interested:
Madison Kaine – Devil On My Shoulder
Have you ever
Fell victim
To a vixen
The devil in disguise
Hook:
Devil on my shoulder
Heart is getting colder
Think you’ll get away from me
But bitch you’re going no where
Look into my eyes now
Think you better lie down
Fore’ I get my knife out
Sorry but it’s lights out
Verse 1:
I hang with girls who do pills and much coke
They love dope, for real, but still I fuck hoes
I meet em in the street, at a show or party
And even some hippie bitches who know I’m narley
I take em to the spot so they can do what it does
The only stipulation is you don’t screw up they buzz
They wanna take advantage of me so they threw me some drugs
I never woulda got involved if I knew what it was
What it is – is a trip ta hell
You do this with them but don’t kiss and tell
And you never talk about who sniffs and sells
The only time you talk about it’s when you visit the devil
So I pick up a shovel and bury my own grave
I got a bad bitch on my side, wanna get high okay
And then she looked me in the eye like she’s a psycho-hey
I only wanted to fuck I don’t wanna die- no way
Hook:
Devil on my shoulder
Heart is getting colder
Think you’ll get away from me
But bitch you’re going no where
Look into my eyes now
Think you better lie down
Fore’ I get my knife out
Sorry but it’s lights out
Verse 2:
With a chick and we walk in the house
I see some Oxy Cotton droppin poppin off at the couch
She introduced me to her friend her name was Stacy Marie
Gave me a shot of Hennessy and started blazing some weed
Before I did I popped a pill so I could switch the pace
We started blazing but I guarantee that shit was laced
Took me to the back room for a tab of acid
Said I like your shirt I said thanks it matches the hat bitch
Ten minutes hasn’t passed and I’m mad lit
I said my name was Madison, I rap and I’m that sick
She said she wanna fuck, I got a Magnum out of the package
And strapped it on and had her flat on the mattress
Got my nut then I dipped for more weed
Which cup is mine, I must have sipped like fourteen
My friend says hey you wanna hit some Morphine
I said no way I’m gonna sit with Courtney
Take a look and there’s so many mother fuckers around her
Everybody’s on an upper or downer
Plus there’s hella people fiddilin with Riddlin, and pills and such
I’m so numb, can’t even feel my nuts
What a night it was, I got my high and buzz
I had a bitch up on me, wasn’t even tryin’ta fuck
And then I take a look at Stacy, she was jealous in the eyes
Shoulda known the whole time she was the devil in disguise
Hook:
Devil on my shoulder
Heart is getting colder
Think you’ll get away from me
But bitch you’re going no where
Look into my eyes now
Think you better lie down
Fore’ I get my knife out
Sorry but it’s lights out
We all got a devil inside
So much shit I think about
I could never describe
You tell by the look in my eyes
If you wanna find out you’ll be dead if you try
One of the other tracks I was going to put on the demo was to demonstrate more of relaxed type of song, but still with raw and complex lyrics.
Madison Kaine - I_m Fucking Hoes.mp3 - 3.68MB
Madison Kaine - I'm Fucking Hoes
Hook:
When you see me and I’m bustin flows
See my enemies but im duckin’ foes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes.
Yeah
Verse:
Call me Mr. Kaine I’m sick it’s plain to see
Ya bitch is angry
So don’t be mad your chick just came to me
So sit and take a sit and listen play the beat
And if you diss and hate on me
I’ll have you missin, basically you aint shit
What a site to see, I gotta pipe with weed
You wanna sniff some coke
Then here’s a line from me
Do some blow on the counter
Here’s a hoe I just found her
She was walking and I saw her all alone up on Gower Street
Now she’s texting me hourly
Asking me how are we
Have some hot sex on the couch
And then can we take a shower please
Now ya leave
Can I have a Valium please
I don’t know what this gal is thinking
Just because I got weed and pills
Ya need ta chill
I love you but that’s only how my penis feels
I’ve got the meanest flows, but
The demon don’t, need a hoe
Leave the door, please just go
Slut
Hook:
When you see me and I’m bustin flows
See my enemies but im duckin’ foes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes.
Yeah
Verse 2:
Watch ya back in Los Angeles
These dog’s scandalous
Hollywood, I cannot stand a bitch
Californ-ia I’m in the city of angles
On my mind everyday is always titties and pain pills
Ya meet this one chick
Ya sleep with some bitch
Ya skeet then come quick
Ya leave then some shit pops off
Because she wanna be ya favorite
Keep your feelings to yourself
It aint my job to save a bitch
Who you know as sick
With flows legit
Who goes and get
Hoes and chicks
To grope his dick
Smoke and sniff blow
And hits dro
Sips Patron
Slit cha throat
Split cha dome
Ya trip ya go
Better get away from me before I snap
Imma bad
Mother fucker you can get it if you want it
Better know that I’m mad
Madison Kaine
Better get up out of my way
Before I
Go get a gun
And put a mother fucking bullet in the back of ya brain
Yeah
Hook:
When you see me and I’m bustin flows
See my enemies but im duckin’ foes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes.
Yeah
Verse 3:
Quit the cheap talk
Let’s dip to me spot
Then rip them jeans off
And sip some cheap vodka
Kaine is elegant, well equipped
Stays with hella chicks
Blazed I’m hella lit
Never a day that I say I’m celibate
Everything that you say is irrelevant
Chillin with a chick and then I hit it from the back
And then I guarantee ya bitch you gonna love that
I don’t even know her but im fucking like a maniac
And now I got a bitch up on my nut sack
Wow
She like my style and swag
Give the bitches my digits so they can dial me back
Maddy
Just because I gave her my phone number
I don’t love her
She’s so stubborn
She told me to fuck her with no rubber
Hoe what are you crazy
You wanna have a baby
So when im rich and famous I can buy you another Mercedez
Now your mother is hating me
Basically, they think they should be dating me
Making me agry, baby please, shady things
Make me mad, so please be gone
And if you think you feel the same way
You should sing the song
Get it on
Hook:
When you see me and I’m bustin flows
See my enemies but im duckin’ foes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes
I’m fuckin’ hoes, hoes.
Yeah
