SOUTHERN LEGEND IN THA MAKING! PEEP!!

[LEX TALIONES]

str8 off tha top of tha dome.....if it's wack let a nigga know....

thank you--
for initiatin' tha START-OF-YOUR-ENDIN'/
HEARTS-WHAT-IM- RIPPIN'/
#1 contender, you clowns is just HONORABLE MENTION/
no FLAWS-IN-MY-PIMPIN/
i'll RUN-IN-YOUR-HOME/wit' my GUN-TO-YOUR-DOME/
KING-OF-THA-SOUTH?/i'll put that THING-IN YOUR-MOUTH/consider me BOMBIN'-YOUR-THRONE/
i'm WARNIN'-YOU-HOLMES/
timid hearts get preyed upon by tha' SAVAGE/
rhymes DEEP-AS-A-LABYRITH/here to save you all like i'm JESUS-OF-NAZARETH/
you PEEPIN'-MY-PATTERNS/
studyin' a REAL-NIGGA-SWAGGER/TRIGGERS-TO-DAGGERS/
comparin' me to you/you as REAL-AS-A-PHANTOM/
you best to get ghost/before your soul get lost LIKE-THA-REST/
feelin' TIGHT-IN-YOUR-CHEST/
as i approached you, you frighten cause you know i be SNIPIN-LIKE-WES/
ly, don't test me, you endanginrin' YOU-AND-YOUR-WIFEY/
enjoy your dinner date before i RUIN-YOUR-NITE, B/
gunplay excites me/ but i'd love to see your face BRUISED-BY-THESE-NIKES/

 

[ovarbmu]

i think you need to keep your multis patterns going an even number of bars...kinda messes up the flow....and the jesus of nazareth shit is WAYYYYYYYYYYY played.....im so tired of hearing that it sickens me...but besides that its coo.....i see the potential to be something GOOD (not particularly great)...just keep at it.