Round 1: Beto916 & Stealth VS.Murk & Intense Fear
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sorry guys but i gotta rush this now and i wont have time tommorow cuz im leavin for over a week so if u can wait like another week if we win for round 2 itd be appreciated if not its cool ill drop anyway
nicest white-kid spittin, i can feel the suspense-here//
fuck around and get MURKed and leave u with INTENSE-FEAR//
and beto know he dont want it ,cuz murk, well, hes-awfully-nice//
beto only won last battle cuz he used cheap word play and had to feed-off-of-me-twice//
stealth and beto fuckin weak im 'crashin' into your 'bars' takin em down like 9-11//
against these 2 lames,this battles "no biggie" like march 9th 1997//
and to whomever brought stealth here, id like to thank who found-this-kid-i-shit-on
id be more than happy to let u drink a cup of my saliva so u can have some talent-when-u-spit-dog
beto or stealth...its kinda hard to decide who flows-tighter//
i dont think it matters cuz this threads bout to get haunted with all them ghost-writers//
thats the only way yall beatin us is if i was the one to write-for-u//
ill keep uppin this thread so everyone advancin to round 2 can say goodbye-to-u//
ill stop typin here it seems yall shakin-a-bit-well//
yall and who killed lamont coleman got somethin in common...yall both takin-a-"big L" (RIP!)
but yea sorry i had to rush the shit!
i coulda done better but i had to get it over with
good luck!
nicest white-kid spittin, i can feel the suspense-here//
fuck around and get MURKed and leave u with INTENSE-FEAR//
and beto know he dont want it ,cuz murk, well, hes-awfully-nice//
beto only won last battle cuz he used cheap word play and had to feed-off-of-me-twice//
stealth and beto fuckin weak im 'crashin' into your 'bars' takin em down like 9-11//
against these 2 lames,this battles "no biggie" like march 9th 1997//
and to whomever brought stealth here, id like to thank who found-this-kid-i-shit-on
id be more than happy to let u drink a cup of my saliva so u can have some talent-when-u-spit-dog
beto or stealth...its kinda hard to decide who flows-tighter//
i dont think it matters cuz this threads bout to get haunted with all them ghost-writers//
thats the only way yall beatin us is if i was the one to write-for-u//
ill keep uppin this thread so everyone advancin to round 2 can say goodbye-to-u//
ill stop typin here it seems yall shakin-a-bit-well//
yall and who killed lamont coleman got somethin in common...yall both takin-a-"big L" (RIP!)
but yea sorry i had to rush the shit!
i coulda done better but i had to get it over with
good luck!
murk...
The party didn’t start /
‘til I logged in
what the fuck yo? /
Mane, what’s happenin’?!
Seems MURK wants to get /
Slapped up again
That’s cool mutha fuckas /
I’m ready for that
Pull 2 Mics out the p-coat /
1 chrome, 1 black
It's time to attack /
I toss one to Stealth /
And we both get to squeezin’
Lettin’ off hot 16’s /
Obliterate your team-n
Rhymes /
Leavin’ you bleedin’
Medical attention needin’ /
Another victim /
of a lyrical beatin’
Playa please /
You ain’t fuckin’ with me /
I’m keystrokin’ smoother than Ray Allen /
When he’s shootin’ them threes
Like Trinidad /
You lost the fight
Slapped around for 16 rounds /
I’m Winky Wright with this Mic
The party didn’t start /
‘til I logged in
what the fuck yo? /
Mane, what’s happenin’?!
Seems MURK wants to get /
Slapped up again
That’s cool mutha fuckas /
I’m ready for that
Pull 2 Mics out the p-coat /
1 chrome, 1 black
It's time to attack /
I toss one to Stealth /
And we both get to squeezin’
Lettin’ off hot 16’s /
Obliterate your team-n
Rhymes /
Leavin’ you bleedin’
Medical attention needin’ /
Another victim /
of a lyrical beatin’
Playa please /
You ain’t fuckin’ with me /
I’m keystrokin’ smoother than Ray Allen /
When he’s shootin’ them threes
Like Trinidad /
You lost the fight
Slapped around for 16 rounds /
I’m Winky Wright with this Mic
to my potna from my town...IF
I come sick with a verse /
And “Bomb First” like Pac
I’m the best from Sac on this board /
You ain’t takin’ my spot
Don’t come around my block /
I hold down my turf with choppers /
Fuckin’ with me, you’ll be up in UCD /
Needin’ every one of those doctors
And just for insurance /
I walk up in your surgery /
In Dr.’s garments
Strapped with a scalpel /
Your most Intense Fear /
Is about to happen, you ASSHOLE.
You’re dyin’ tonight.. /
BETO’s takin’ your life
Cut your chest open /
watch the blood bubble like sprite
Nobody gon’ mourn you /
Not even ya wifey /
Your “homies” don’t make R.I.P shirts /
said they don’t wanna waste the white tees
Nobody spill no liquor /
Even your Momma said /
“It’s about time someone got that n***a!”
peace
I come sick with a verse /
And “Bomb First” like Pac
I’m the best from Sac on this board /
You ain’t takin’ my spot
Don’t come around my block /
I hold down my turf with choppers /
Fuckin’ with me, you’ll be up in UCD /
Needin’ every one of those doctors
And just for insurance /
I walk up in your surgery /
In Dr.’s garments
Strapped with a scalpel /
Your most Intense Fear /
Is about to happen, you ASSHOLE.
You’re dyin’ tonight.. /
BETO’s takin’ your life
Cut your chest open /
watch the blood bubble like sprite
Nobody gon’ mourn you /
Not even ya wifey /
Your “homies” don’t make R.I.P shirts /
said they don’t wanna waste the white tees
Nobody spill no liquor /
Even your Momma said /
“It’s about time someone got that n***a!”
peace
I just got back from my trip...not a lot of time to do this, but...
I'm poundin these bitches like Pacers games when the bench clears/
The ends-near for Murk and its curtains for Intense Fear/
Murk's-using-dashes-like-hes-Fatal's-replacement
Either bitin or ghostwritin, got him tied up in the basement/
Get on your knees and pray that you're prayin the right prayer
If your name was "Wes Craven" you couldn't be the "New Nyghtmare"/
I fight-pairs of partners/ and split 'em up like divorces/
Man, the skills that I possess are straight up sweeter than the Force is/
Your torched, bitch - You dont have the tools to fight it with the pros/
The "bars" i spit are "gold" like I got "Midas" in my bones/
I'm fuckin Titus with the prose, the fuckin tighest with the flows/
The only title that you got is "the fucking whitest one who blows"
The author-itis (arthiritis) makes you moan, and shuts you up like its the mafia/
Just standing on my "level" will give you cases of "apoxia"/ (<-- Altitude Siccness
)
Get off the "nuts", you got a "Planter's addicition"/
I can't even stand to listen to these amateurs spittin/
Its like a man in the kitchen: you're confusin your role/
Thinkin you're the #1 Seed, but I got you losin in my poll/
Intense - please dont post until you're pipin-hot-and-able/
Or at least take a tip from your partner and start bitin-off-of-Fatal...
(I gotta go to work, I'll have the one against my partner when I get back...)
I'm poundin these bitches like Pacers games when the bench clears/
The ends-near for Murk and its curtains for Intense Fear/
Murk's-using-dashes-like-hes-Fatal's-replacement
Either bitin or ghostwritin, got him tied up in the basement/
Get on your knees and pray that you're prayin the right prayer
If your name was "Wes Craven" you couldn't be the "New Nyghtmare"/
I fight-pairs of partners/ and split 'em up like divorces/
Man, the skills that I possess are straight up sweeter than the Force is/
Your torched, bitch - You dont have the tools to fight it with the pros/
The "bars" i spit are "gold" like I got "Midas" in my bones/
I'm fuckin Titus with the prose, the fuckin tighest with the flows/
The only title that you got is "the fucking whitest one who blows"
The author-itis (arthiritis) makes you moan, and shuts you up like its the mafia/
Just standing on my "level" will give you cases of "apoxia"/ (<-- Altitude Siccness
)Get off the "nuts", you got a "Planter's addicition"/
I can't even stand to listen to these amateurs spittin/
Its like a man in the kitchen: you're confusin your role/
Thinkin you're the #1 Seed, but I got you losin in my poll/
Intense - please dont post until you're pipin-hot-and-able/
Or at least take a tip from your partner and start bitin-off-of-Fatal...
(I gotta go to work, I'll have the one against my partner when I get back...)
This nigga BETO get his chest blown, you aint from Sac
If rhymes was females it'd be the only time I "play" ya raps
You gay, in fact.. won't leave your face intact, I'm too loc'd
You aint on fire.. puttin lips on "fags" is the only way you'd smoke
I'll devour this coward.. he aint even got what it takes to win
The 916 in ya name is your rank, on the sicc its what place your in
Out of a thousand, nine-hundred-&-fifteen got you bowin
Woulda been more, but we got tired & stopped the countin
What I'm sayin is you're whack.. Hopefully you get it
Does it stink in here? yea.. cuz on Beto I just shitted
The mood just shifted.. this nigga got his punk ass layed to rest
Spend the rest of ya days in check.. you shoulda stayed in bed
As for Stealth.. welp.. it's like jello.. there's always room for more
It's simple.. you suck so much dick at flows.. we consider you a whore
Get plowed by 2 or more.. nigga you can't win like the Steelers
If you win.. this battle will come off more rigged than a dealer
You whack as fuck.. Beto prolly pissed cuz you da weakest link
This nigga couldn't "spot" a "flow" if his faucet was "leaking tea"
Nigga please.. I'll dismantle your weak flows at a rapid pace
& crack ya jaw so bad you'd need surgury to get it back in place
I'll set you up to nuise yourself, I hope-you-reach-the-cable
You pissed cuz Murk and I are the fuckin closest-thing-to-Fatal
That means we the closest to being Champs, you gettin bounced now
Bet ya spit ya flow as a joke.. thinkin "Did I spit that whack shit out loud?"
If rhymes was females it'd be the only time I "play" ya raps
You gay, in fact.. won't leave your face intact, I'm too loc'd
You aint on fire.. puttin lips on "fags" is the only way you'd smoke
I'll devour this coward.. he aint even got what it takes to win
The 916 in ya name is your rank, on the sicc its what place your in
Out of a thousand, nine-hundred-&-fifteen got you bowin
Woulda been more, but we got tired & stopped the countin
What I'm sayin is you're whack.. Hopefully you get it
Does it stink in here? yea.. cuz on Beto I just shitted
The mood just shifted.. this nigga got his punk ass layed to rest
Spend the rest of ya days in check.. you shoulda stayed in bed
As for Stealth.. welp.. it's like jello.. there's always room for more
It's simple.. you suck so much dick at flows.. we consider you a whore
Get plowed by 2 or more.. nigga you can't win like the Steelers
If you win.. this battle will come off more rigged than a dealer
You whack as fuck.. Beto prolly pissed cuz you da weakest link
This nigga couldn't "spot" a "flow" if his faucet was "leaking tea"
Nigga please.. I'll dismantle your weak flows at a rapid pace
& crack ya jaw so bad you'd need surgury to get it back in place
I'll set you up to nuise yourself, I hope-you-reach-the-cable
You pissed cuz Murk and I are the fuckin closest-thing-to-Fatal
That means we the closest to being Champs, you gettin bounced now
Bet ya spit ya flow as a joke.. thinkin "Did I spit that whack shit out loud?"
Murk Vs. BETO916 - 6/10
Murk Vs. Stealth - 7/10
IntenseFear Vs. BETO916 - 9/10
IntenseFear Vs. Stealth - 8/10
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BETO916 Vs. Murk - 6/10
BETO916 Vs. IntenseFear - 8/10
Stealth Vs. Murk - 9/10
Stealth Vs. IntenseFear - 6/10
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Tallied up....
Murk & IntenseFear - 30
Stealth & BETO916 - 29
Vote - Murk & IntenseFear
Murk Vs. Stealth - 7/10
IntenseFear Vs. BETO916 - 9/10
IntenseFear Vs. Stealth - 8/10
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BETO916 Vs. Murk - 6/10
BETO916 Vs. IntenseFear - 8/10
Stealth Vs. Murk - 9/10
Stealth Vs. IntenseFear - 6/10
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Tallied up....
Murk & IntenseFear - 30
Stealth & BETO916 - 29
Vote - Murk & IntenseFear
OK so I see you disagree with me.... That's cool. Check it then....
Direct diss with a punch and a metaphor. Rhymes were clean as well.
Ditto.
Direct blows homeboy. Attacking your name and using it against you.
The follow-up/ending of the last 2 bars....
A so-so line. Not bad but not great. Still holds the verse up.
Probably the weakest bars of the verse, but the rhymes were koo.
All in all this verse is a BATTLE verse, which is exactly what I'm looking for when judging a BATTLE. Any more questions?
Direct diss with a punch and a metaphor. Rhymes were clean as well.
Ditto.
Direct blows homeboy. Attacking your name and using it against you.
The follow-up/ending of the last 2 bars....
A so-so line. Not bad but not great. Still holds the verse up.
Probably the weakest bars of the verse, but the rhymes were koo.
All in all this verse is a BATTLE verse, which is exactly what I'm looking for when judging a BATTLE. Any more questions?