i like the composition and exeuction.....
but i feel like all the red drowns everything out
and doesnt really give u a focal point......
try making the fonts, sky or castle another color,
or play with lighting effects 2 make the piece pop out.....
its begging 4 a place 2 draw the eyes n 1st, right now its
all hitting the eye 2 the same time, not really conveying anything.....
maybe juss a different color outline on the fonts would fix it.....
something small like that might do it....
but it might juss look alot better with a whole new color scheme.....