I hate to post OT threads, but I really want some thoughts on this song. Basically, I heard lost by Gorilla Zoe and thought the song was great but a little lacking so my homie Rob decided to remake it for us to enjoy it more.
What do you guys think?
[verse 1]
floatin around, above the ground i'm an angel
lost now i'm found, by the kindness of a stranger
drunk off hypnotic,i can't even feel my fangaz
turn ya robotic, it Kanye and T-pain ya
caribou lou; gettin blown like hot, soup
television on mute,see her strollin like a nupe
12 step ballaholic and you can too
got your girl beating pipes like the blue man group
yeah, yeah see my brim stay leaned,
never met a nigga that can do it like me
kiss it while u grippin sheets,hit it while im grippin feet,
aim it make it hit ya cheek,then i leave
yall muhfuckaz musta lost yo mind thinkin im not considered number one of all time
its a sin its a crime; never do it like i done it, cuz i run it like Obama and biden in 09
twiddling ya thumbs, and bidin yo time, is only gonna hurt ya grind down the line
the greatest rapper pound for pound underground,
stay leaps and bounds above these heaps of clowns
money over the hoes the motto,i'm macho, frozen overload, i'm hot,phone the marshall
hose a nigga down, then i dick ya down in ya ear vagina cuz this rhymer a tough act to follow
[hook](2x)
i know yall losin it, i know yall losin it
i know yall losin, yall losin yall minds
i'm not number 2,recognize i'm the truth
always wreckin the booth, im the best of all time
[verse 2]
yes, i have returned,to the depths of my lair, escapin from haters,
never turn back, so i keep my head forward, one hand on my sack
Official rasta flow, da bwoy can rap
keep my ipod on,og's gimme dap
my contacts are so sharp,gotta wear an eye...patch
that means they dress fly, trap
venus rocks gleamin, more space than a gap
i'm so abstract,and my pockets so fat
pockets like Star Jones before she got vac'd
nigga all my cars hard, no matter which i sub in
you can say i roll callous; Range white with tough skin
car lot ku klux, got horses under hoods
man, fuck dat, the bass get knocked like Suge
subliminal messages and hidden innuendo
I get my 16's bit like a super nintendo
[hook](2x)
i know yall losin it, i know yall losin it
i know yall losin, yall losin yall minds
i'm not number 2,recognize i'm the truth
always wreckin the booth, im the best of all time
[Bridge]
i'm lost on a road
i'm losing my mind
i know who not to trust
those who on my nuts
only for my bucks
i'm never givin up
im lost on a road
and i don't know what's wrong with me
that's why i keep that styrofoam with me
and that microphone with me
[hook](2x)
cuz i know yall losin it, i know yall losin it
i know yall losin, yall losin yall minds
i'm not number 2,recognize i'm the truth
always wreckin the booth, im the best of all time
floatin around, above the ground i'm an angel
lost now i'm found, by the kindness of a stranger
drunk off hypnotic,i can't even feel my fangaz
turn ya robotic, it Kanye and T-pain ya
caribou lou; gettin blown like hot, soup
television on mute,see her strollin like a nupe
12 step ballaholic and you can too
got your girl beating pipes like the blue man group
yeah, yeah see my brim stay leaned,
never met a nigga that can do it like me
kiss it while u grippin sheets,hit it while im grippin feet,
aim it make it hit ya cheek,then i leave
yall muhfuckaz musta lost yo mind thinkin im not considered number one of all time
its a sin its a crime; never do it like i done it, cuz i run it like Obama and biden in 09
twiddling ya thumbs, and bidin yo time, is only gonna hurt ya grind down the line
the greatest rapper pound for pound underground,
stay leaps and bounds above these heaps of clowns
money over the hoes the motto,i'm macho, frozen overload, i'm hot,phone the marshall
hose a nigga down, then i dick ya down in ya ear vagina cuz this rhymer a tough act to follow
[hook](2x)
i know yall losin it, i know yall losin it
i know yall losin, yall losin yall minds
i'm not number 2,recognize i'm the truth
always wreckin the booth, im the best of all time
[verse 2]
yes, i have returned,to the depths of my lair, escapin from haters,
never turn back, so i keep my head forward, one hand on my sack
Official rasta flow, da bwoy can rap
keep my ipod on,og's gimme dap
my contacts are so sharp,gotta wear an eye...patch
that means they dress fly, trap
venus rocks gleamin, more space than a gap
i'm so abstract,and my pockets so fat
pockets like Star Jones before she got vac'd
nigga all my cars hard, no matter which i sub in
you can say i roll callous; Range white with tough skin
car lot ku klux, got horses under hoods
man, fuck dat, the bass get knocked like Suge
subliminal messages and hidden innuendo
I get my 16's bit like a super nintendo
[hook](2x)
i know yall losin it, i know yall losin it
i know yall losin, yall losin yall minds
i'm not number 2,recognize i'm the truth
always wreckin the booth, im the best of all time
[Bridge]
i'm lost on a road
i'm losing my mind
i know who not to trust
those who on my nuts
only for my bucks
i'm never givin up
im lost on a road
and i don't know what's wrong with me
that's why i keep that styrofoam with me
and that microphone with me
[hook](2x)
cuz i know yall losin it, i know yall losin it
i know yall losin, yall losin yall minds
i'm not number 2,recognize i'm the truth
always wreckin the booth, im the best of all time
What do you guys think?
