Before I give my feedback, let me ask who did your music?
Secondly, I like the line that said, "nutin hard about you like lesbian sex."
Usually I give feedback in private. I think only a couple of times have I posted it, but this one I am gonna just post.
First about the production. The production of this song is very good. There are only a couple of things to critique. The bassline (sounds like an organ) is steady through the song. It is a very risky sound in that either people will like it a lot or hate it. Probably not much middle ground. But hey, go for yours.
The breakdown on the hook is not adding to the song. That is suppose to be when people can nod they head a liiiitle bit higher/lower. the music lacks that. But the overall production is very good. They did a good job making it into a radio version. There are still a couple of words in there that not might fly. I think I heard the word "dick" in there. I doubt that one will pass on the radio...nowadays though most everything else wont be a problem. (aint that some shit)
The lyrics. This song is a song that is kind of like a parody. It is makin fun of wanna be thugs, right. Cool message. Kinda funny. Very well delivered lyrics. You have a good command of the mic. I even heard some gas n' brake in there.
I like the song. I wouldn't buy a CD just off hearing this song. But I would say that an accumulation of songs this strong and a little stronger would make me...... take note and if they was in my face wit promotion.... possibly get it. I'm, a hard ass though, I dont buy much. I love underground shit, but I can appreciate lyrical talent. You got a solid voice. I would like to hear another track (that says somethin right there; if people want to hear more, it must be solid).
good luck
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