(New Music) Reckless - "Cold War"

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recklessofgilaz

recklessofgilaz

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Oct 30, 2008
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Gilaz with Track Killa and Vince
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Foul Mouth said:
lyrics aside, you need to work on your delivery player. the little messican homies in gil town might dig it, but you need to be honest with your self. keep recording while changing up/experimenting with your delivery. listen to other rappers and other artists in general. you need to understand what delivery is. you just might not got it. or you just might have to dig deeper to find it.
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Thank you bro that really helped me out. much Appreciated!
 
S.SAVAGE

S.SAVAGE

SICCNESS MOTHERFUCKER
#22
Oct 25, 2011
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Not hating Reck, you know we are cool folks but....

That song would be pretty dope if you made a few changes to it:

1. Had a different verse.
2. Put a different rapper on it.
3. Used a different beat.
4. Tiddies.

Good luck bro
 
recklessofgilaz

recklessofgilaz

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#23
Oct 30, 2008
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Gilaz with Track Killa and Vince
#23
S.SAVAGE said:
Not hating Reck, you know we are cool folks but....

That song would be pretty dope if you made a few changes to it:

1. Had a different verse.
2. Put a different rapper on it.
3. Used a different beat.
4. Tiddies.

Good luck bro
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How the fuck did I forget the Tiddies! lol all good bro thanx bro!
 
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Fruitvale_Mac

Sicc OG
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SouthernComfort said:
Did not like it. Sounded amateurish. Like you have no business rapping.
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^I agree with this guy. The flow is simplistic to the point that I can't really say you're flowing. The delivery doesn't mesh with the beat at all and the lyrics aren't original or complex. I don't want to sound like a hater but that's me being 100%. It sounds like this is your first attempt at writing a rap song.
 
recklessofgilaz

recklessofgilaz

Im Gay until I log back in
#35
Oct 30, 2008
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Gilaz with Track Killa and Vince
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Fruitvale_Mac said:
^I agree with this guy. The flow is simplistic to the point that I can't really say you're flowing. The delivery doesn't mesh with the beat at all and the lyrics aren't original or complex. I don't want to sound like a hater but that's me being 100%. It sounds like this is your first attempt at writing a rap song.
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naw not a hater just someone with an opinion and giving constructive critisism I thank you for your input Ima re record this track at my regular studio that I fuck with. I recorded this song at a different one that im not use to but thanx again everyone for the feedback its much appriciated!
 
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