This is a good look (and you know I'm a bluntly honest person). I'm feeling the way the production fits with the tone of your voice. The vibe/tempo is mellow, but the percussion pounds enough to give it some intensity. But, I think dude on the hook should close the record out instead of it the track just riding out. Keep the "mood music" thing going (that's the producer in me talking). All in all good shit.