To be honest with you I think you should get a cleaner look, because the shit has tooooo much going on. It's fire, letters in the back ground, letters on your shirt, jumbled off centered letters and numbers at the bottom. Sometimes less is more and if you don't have the top quality graphics person to pull "more" off, then go with "less"...just an opinion.
looks alright....i think the fire makes ur skin look a little orangey, and the farenheit 451/fire in the background/i got heat on the mic thing isnt really very attention grabbing or original.....it looks like your designer doesnt do much hip hop graphics work cuz they kinda came with the cheese on this, but best looking one is #2