Need help writting an essay
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Anything the government does..Slavery (which goes hand in hand with what the government does)...Most court cases where a man is trying to get custody or visitation....Divorce settlements.....Man i could go on and on...Religion....Sexual Orientation...Health care...
Here are some books you can reference in your paper....Just google it...You can find an injustice in everything....
Anatomy of Peace
Confessions of an Economic Hit Man
Leadership and Self-Deception,
When Corporations Rule the World
The Post-Corporate World
Alternatives to Economic Globalization
Screwed
A Game as Old as Empire
books on Social Justice Topics include:
Out of Poverty, by Paul Polak
Making Sustainability Work, by Marc Epstein
Framing the Future, by Bernie Horn
Cracking the Code, by Thom Hartmann
Community, by Peter Block
More Than Money, by Mark Albion
Just Good Business, by Kellie McElhaney
Here are some books you can reference in your paper....Just google it...You can find an injustice in everything....
Anatomy of Peace
Confessions of an Economic Hit Man
Leadership and Self-Deception,
When Corporations Rule the World
The Post-Corporate World
Alternatives to Economic Globalization
Screwed
A Game as Old as Empire
books on Social Justice Topics include:
Out of Poverty, by Paul Polak
Making Sustainability Work, by Marc Epstein
Framing the Future, by Bernie Horn
Cracking the Code, by Thom Hartmann
Community, by Peter Block
More Than Money, by Mark Albion
Just Good Business, by Kellie McElhaney
In all seriousness, have someone proof read your essay for you before turning it in. Not one of your homies either but like someone in your class. Because if you write stuff like holded or spell divorce as divorese/divorse you are going to fail no matter how good your essay is.
I'm not talking shit either. I know when people write on the Sicc they use a lot of slang or type quick and don't really care how they spell shit but some of the stuff you post makes me scratch my head a lot.
I'm not talking shit either. I know when people write on the Sicc they use a lot of slang or type quick and don't really care how they spell shit but some of the stuff you post makes me scratch my head a lot.
yea fa sho thanx for the advice my teacher actually is hella cool and will proof read the essay before the due date and will tell me whats missing what I did wrong and stuff like that. he makes sure we not only do well but learn how to structure essays correctly in MLA formats in order to prepare us for harder english classes in the future. hella cool ass class
if you dont do divorce you should do the oscar grant case. something current and relevant.
1-2 pgs summing up what happened
2-3 pgs summing up the trial
the rest explaining why the outcome was unjust. give examples of harsher prison sentences for far less severe crimes, etc.
wait...they have education in gilroy?
1-2 pgs summing up what happened
2-3 pgs summing up the trial
the rest explaining why the outcome was unjust. give examples of harsher prison sentences for far less severe crimes, etc.
wait...they have education in gilroy?
this is not good advice
I mean... it's a good idea for a paper, but he shouldn't spend 5 out of 7 pages simply summing up what happened...
The point of an essay is to develop a thesis and argue your that thesis. You're basically saying he should only spend a little over 1/4 of his entire essay arguing his thesis
I don't know exactly what the professor is asking you to write specifically... but usually professors want to hear what you have to say. They don't need to hear all the details of the Oscar Grant trial, which they more than likely have already heard
State your thesis in the introduction, provide a brief summary of what happened (not 5 pages), then argue your thesis with different specific examples relating to the case. Once that's done... wrap it all up in a conclusion paragraph...
I mean... it's a good idea for a paper, but he shouldn't spend 5 out of 7 pages simply summing up what happened...
The point of an essay is to develop a thesis and argue your that thesis. You're basically saying he should only spend a little over 1/4 of his entire essay arguing his thesis
I don't know exactly what the professor is asking you to write specifically... but usually professors want to hear what you have to say. They don't need to hear all the details of the Oscar Grant trial, which they more than likely have already heard
State your thesis in the introduction, provide a brief summary of what happened (not 5 pages), then argue your thesis with different specific examples relating to the case. Once that's done... wrap it all up in a conclusion paragraph...
^^lol
nah fool. my idea was solid
start off your divorce paper with just paragraph of a general breakdown of the process of divorce and child custody and how it works. then end it with a sentence or two saying why you think its problematic. or unjust.
just make sure you're not all over the place for the next 6-8 pgs. have 3-4 specific reasons why its unjust and cover them one by one with examples for each
then conclude it saying ppl shouldnt have kids
nah fool. my idea was solid
start off your divorce paper with just paragraph of a general breakdown of the process of divorce and child custody and how it works. then end it with a sentence or two saying why you think its problematic. or unjust.
just make sure you're not all over the place for the next 6-8 pgs. have 3-4 specific reasons why its unjust and cover them one by one with examples for each
then conclude it saying ppl shouldnt have kids
If you write anything that calls out police or discretion of a race you won't get very good grade scores unless your teacher is on some Immortal Technique/NWA shit..
They will also put you on a terrorist watch list and conduct cavity searches every morning at the doors of your school. However, if you attach a pic of your sisters areolas to the essay you may get a perfect score, breh.
They will also put you on a terrorist watch list and conduct cavity searches every morning at the doors of your school. However, if you attach a pic of your sisters areolas to the essay you may get a perfect score, breh.