Nas - Last Words (incomplete)

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T-Craq

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inspired by the song "Last Words" off Nastradamus featuring Nashawn, that's btw as well the lyrics of that song on the paper sheet in the background

I'm not really satisfied with this, since I'm not that good/creative on text, so tell me what to change, add or just ideas so I can complete something I'm actually feeling myself

 
DubbC415

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Mickey Fallon
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Tomato Alley
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pretty tight, but there are two things that i see that u might wanna fix. this is just my opinion, but the left side of his face is a little dark, and the Nas part might wanna be made a little darker too. but other than that, its pretty tight.
 
Mr. Samos

Mr. Samos

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I like the desert type color. The shadow is a little intense on him. The font and text effect isn't working very well. Maybe re-trace the Nas logo and trying playing with some different textures on that, and completely re-do the Last Words title aswel. Maybe try a thicker stroke on the outline with a lighter color to add contrast, maybe a gold, or dim gold color to match the theme and a smaller drop shadow to bring out the effect in the text along with some texture. Maybe add a border on the cover. Keep working at it, never stop a project until you are completely satisfied with it.
 
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T-Craq

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Nov 28, 2003
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^^thanx man (I just found mine on google)

keep the suggestion coming, so I can fix everything at once... or at least as much as possible
 
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T-Craq

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3deanhg said:
but i only like the bg the rest is _______________...
Click to expand...
I bet u think there's not much done to the Nas pic but it is... just had to say this

and yeah, I'll try lightening it up, we'll see how it works out
 
UCArts

UCArts

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Nice work!

Id move the Last Word font together more, and the left side of his face is dark.
Maybe darken the background more so it works with the face? just an idea

Good work Keep it up!
 
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