my version of the melocholy maze(how ever that is spelt)

[QUICK-NESS-]

but yea i was hella bored and decided to do something like it, cause i was in class watchin damn teacher talk so said fuck it let me write something then came up wit the idea, but remember its for fun so i hope nobody comes sayin i bit tech, was jus bored so came home n recorded it quickly.peep.mixin wasnt too great. but ehh

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=496551&songID=5746539

 

[KirbyDaAlmighty]

Haha, that was cool.

The intro made me laugh.


The part where you said "Fuck" under your breath.
Hahaha.

I do that to my teachers all the time.

 

[Soe]

haha i liked thats shit it was pretty tight

 

[sobman]

Anyone else think it sounded like the beginning to a porno?

 

[QUICK-NESS-]

^lmao hahahaha,thanx

 

[KirbyDaAlmighty]

"Do you have somethin' you'd like to share with us?"
"You know it."

Bow. Chicka. Wah. Wah.


Haha, just fuckin' with ya.
Seriously, though, I love it.

 

[TaxMan]

Sounded good, only thing I didn't like was the gun fire at the end. I'd make it louder, it sounds really muffled.

 

[Speedy]

Your teacher stayed pretty calm even after you called him nigga..lol

 

[Speedy]

I feel like there is not enough going on in the calls room. You should crumble paper and use pencil sharpener and put them on beat. Kind of like Tech did with all the foot steps. And have a girl in the back say "What a loser" in a snotty voice.

 

[rollinhooters]

yeah it was pretty cool

 

[tha_psycho]

that was cool haha.... yeh i agree with speedy... but if a teacher is lecturing not that much will be going on...

 

[rising_tied]

Yea I dunno why but it seemed quiet or something I dunno... But haha Yea when you said fuck under your breath, shit was funny. And the part bout the dog n tighten the leash was tight. Good shit man.. And yea I agree with that dude... Make the gun shots louder or clearer

 

[BigRuiz]

it was cool

 

[D-MenTed]

Whut Type Of Equipment u use my Nigga ??

 

[twiztid22ditziw]

wasnt bad
i liked it

 

[Disastxr]

Yeah..it was real dope. I agree with the above statements and would like to add one myself. I think you should add a little beat type shit like Tech did, just to give it a little touch.

 

[in10city_131x]

I like it
but kids, it's not cool to kill your teacher. not even in a song. they're just doing their job and most of them don't realize that they're taking part in a massive experiment of dumbing down, brainwashing, and conditioning the youth

 

[sobman]

Whut Type Of Equipment u use my Nigga ??

pro tools

 

[D-MenTed]

^ Other then that like mic and all that Mixer shit like that

i liked pro tools but i use Adobe Audition

 

[QUICK-NESS-]

^i use adobe audition to mix sometimes but yea pro tools

and thanx yall, i agree speedy i mean i didnt have much ideas, so i did it simple but im gonna work on it, and some more stuff, raise the other vocals of ppl talkin add some new stuff and fix the gun shit.thanx for the tips and props.PZZ