My love song to hip hop peep it

[Artistic]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/589321139b980634/

give me some feedback

tell me i suck or tell me it was good whatever

just give it a listen

this was recorded 1 week ago

 

[DuceTheTruth]

I dont think you suck.

You have a decent delivery and flow....

And that song was OK.....

IMO.

If I was to hear more from you I might completely change my mind.

 

[thatguy]

use soundclick.... i cant listen on zshare dunno why

 

[Artistic]

thanks alot for the feedback DeucefaceD

i really appreciate it. anyone else?

positive or negative it's all good just keep it real.

i'll have some more new songs to post soon. peace to Jay Bias he produced this track.

 

[Artistic]

use soundclick.... i cant listen on zshare dunno why

let me see what i can do about getting it up on soundclick. i used to have an account there but im not sure what happened with it. Thanks for showing interest though thatguy.

 

[thatguy]

let me see what i can do about getting it up on soundclick. i used to have an account there but im not sure what happened with it. Thanks for showing interest though thatguy.

for sure, ill give you feedback you can give me feedback on some of my tracks

 

[DuceTheTruth]

All the time!

Stay at it.

 

[jaybias]

ey nice beat

at time it seems like you trying to force to many words for a bar but its cool tho

 

[Artistic]

thanks a lot man. I was wondering what you would think of it.

 

[CHAPO GUZMAN]

you kinda sound like Illa J.. J Dilla's brother.

real spit....

not a bad track at all.

 

[CHAPO GUZMAN]

this is who you kinda sound like..

 

[Artistic]

you kinda sound like Illa J.. J Dilla's brother.

real spit....

not a bad track at all.

thanks a lot discuss650

im a check out the Illa J song right now. never listened to him but of course I know about JDilla.

 

[shizzniddel V.S]

do you have a lisp? lol...

 

[Artistic]

yeah ive always had a lisp lol

 

[thatguy]

any luck getting this on soundclick yet?

 

[Artistic]

any luck getting this on soundclick yet?

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=343969&content=music

here it go. it's the only song on the page.

 

[thatguy]

pretty nice... i dont like yur voice... but thats not anything you can help

 

[Artistic]

thanks for checking out the song thatguy

 

[Hihlosis]

Good shit Artistic, "I've been spittin' ryhmes since the days of reeboks, pumps."

Only thing I can say is your lisp is kinda poking it's evil head out hard on some of those lines. Nice two bars though.

Who laced the beat?

 

[Artistic]

Thanks for the feedback Hilhosis

Song was produced by Jay Bias who also posts on here