My first attempt

[Rusto]

My first attempt. NEED SUGGESTIONS!

this is RIX representing ANTIOCH

i know the font aint dope,
I just need some comments and suggestions.
help me out!
PEACE!

 

[maddog]

it's dope.

 

[Rusto]

UP!

 

[ConnDemned]

the I of rix is cut off on the top... and did you add tattoo's to dude's arms? if so I'd take those off, if not I hope dude regrets getting his name and town on both arms at that size.... I'd probably work on the "wid appearances" type because it's a bit hard to read and "with" would work better then "wid" or even "w/appearances"

 

[Rusto]

LOL yea, i added those.That was from a previous time i was bored and fucking around. Your right i need to take them out. This isnt even a legit cover, just something i did when i was bored. . and i made it "wid" to add character.

 

[SiccMadeLoc]

good fo a first time

 

[angHeLL]

Agree! It is good for a first time cd cover! I'd say the face in the upper right hand corner should go. It's not good to overdo ghost imaging. If you really wanted to keep that pic as well.. I'd make this more of a simple collage piece.. and improve the visibility in that area.

 

[Rusto]

UPDATE

 

[Deadly Game]

next time start off by makin it at 500 by 500 or 450 x 450 pixels.....a CD cover is square.......not bad for a first time though.....

 

[angHeLL]

That looks much better! Very clean!