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dope, alot differnt then most business cards so it brings attention to it. I'd right align the "photography and graphic design despartment" although it doesnt look bad the other way
 
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As a business card personally I don't like it too much. It would work, but I really don't understand your company logo. I see the shape of a 3, but that's all, the rest doesn't register, I think it's just a bad logo that's all.

If your using the photo on the card to show that you really DO photography and it's there to catch peoples attention i'd maybe switch the photo up also, looks like you dodged on the facial/cheek area and under the eye and inbetween the eyebrows, making it look like the face bulges out. And just the overall expression on the guy, not sure if it's you, I guess it's you, looks confusing, dude looks confused.

I just really wouldn't send this to print personally. And ofcourse the type looks blurry, not sure if that's just for web purposes but it should be clean type.

Peace
 
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Mr. Samos said:
As a business card personally I don't like it too much. It would work, but I really don't understand your company logo. I see the shape of a 3, but that's all, the rest doesn't register, I think it's just a bad logo that's all.

If your using the photo on the card to show that you really DO photography and it's there to catch peoples attention i'd maybe switch the photo up also, looks like you dodged on the facial/cheek area and under the eye and inbetween the eyebrows, making it look like the face bulges out. And just the overall expression on the guy, not sure if it's you, I guess it's you, looks confusing, dude looks confused.

I just really wouldn't send this to print personally. And ofcourse the type looks blurry, not sure if that's just for web purposes but it should be clean type.

Peace
W/ the logo its a "B" and a "P". now with the "B" it also plays as a "3". The 3 stands for the three brothers that own the company. On the origal photo the face doesnt have the dodge mark on the face. aint sure where that came from. and the blur if from the site i uploaded this at. I screen captured befor it was finish loading..but thx for the feed back
 
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3deanhg said:
W/ the logo its a "B" and a "P". now with the "B" it also plays as a "3". The 3 stands for the three brothers that own the company. On the origal photo the face doesnt have the dodge mark on the face. aint sure where that came from. and the blur if from the site i uploaded this at. I screen captured befor it was finish loading..but thx for the feed back
DAMN LOOK AT ALL THESE EXCUSES.AND DODGE DOSENT JUST MAGICALLY SHOW UP.COME ON YOU TRYIN TO FOOL A FORUM FULL OF PHOTOSHOP USERS HAHHAA WOW
 
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Mr. Samos said:
As a business card personally I don't like it too much. It would work, but I really don't understand your company logo. I see the shape of a 3, but that's all, the rest doesn't register, I think it's just a bad logo that's all.

If your using the photo on the card to show that you really DO photography and it's there to catch peoples attention i'd maybe switch the photo up also, looks like you dodged on the facial/cheek area and under the eye and inbetween the eyebrows, making it look like the face bulges out. And just the overall expression on the guy, not sure if it's you, I guess it's you, looks confusing, dude looks confused.
I just really wouldn't send this to print personally. And ofcourse the type looks blurry, not sure if that's just for web purposes but it should be clean type.

Peace
OH I GUESS I CANT READ IN ENGLISH