My 2nd photoshop

[Slim Ivory]

Just wanting some ideas and ways to make this better. This is only my 2nd photoshop attempt.....Thanks everyone

 

[Likwid]

Did you make the mic, star etc. yourself? Well for starters I would work on that star. The bottom points should not be that much smaller than the top, makes it look kinda funky.

 

[Slim Ivory]

yea,i follow a ps tutorial for the mic,and i made the star myself........Im working on the star now..

 

[Slim Ivory]

Ive noticed the image kinda looks pixelated,how do i clean it up where its clean and crisp? Just make the image bigger and do it again?

 

[EDJ]

^UP THE DPI.

 

[Slim Ivory]

worked on star

I worked on teh star some.....

 

[BayBoss420]

just from a design perspective , everything to me seems so seperate, unrelated, and doesnt have much flow. Maybe find a way to get it all to work better together but U Can keep everything you made for it just change it around, or you can add or take away stuff

 

[EDJ]

^I DISAgREE. THE LOgO KIND OF REMINDS ME OF WHAT THE B.E.T LOgO FLOW DOES.

SLIM IVORY,
IF I WERE YOU I WOULD PUT THE STAR UP A LITTLE(TO WHERE IT'S CENTERED HORIZONTALLY TO THE LINE UNDA THE "PHAT STARZ". ALSO THAT MIC NEEDS TO BE SMALLER CAUSE IT TAKES AWAY FROM EVERYTHANg ELSE. IF YOU CAN, YOU COULD SEE WHAT IT LOOK LIKE BEHIND "PHAT STARZ".

 

[Slim Ivory]

^ Im not really getting what your saying about the star centered with the other line.

The mic looks like crap behind Phat Starz,so i took it out.

 

[EDJ]

^MEANIN', IF YOU LOOK AT IT HORIZONTALLY, THAT THE CENTER OF THE STAR, LINES UP WITH THE LINE, SO IT WILL BE BI-SYMMETRICAL. BUT YOU HAVE TO MAKE THE MIC SMALLER CAUSE IT'S TAKIN' AWAY FROM THE FOCUS OF EVERYTHANg ELSE AND I HAVE A FEELIN' THAT YOU WANNA KEEP IT.

 

[Slim Ivory]

This one better or worse? ^Made this before that post,lol

 

[EDJ]

^PUT ENTERTAINMENT MORE CENTERED TO THE RIgHT. BUT YOU CAN EVEN HAVE THE MIC MORE FADED IN THE BAK.

 

[BayBoss420]

^^^ yeah good call, it already looks alot better as far as flow...lookin good

 

[Defy]

This one better or worse? ^Made this before that post,lol

like they said, but the mic back in, but keep that line under "entertainment"

also fix the star so the black outline lines up with the blue star evenly.

and make sure the word "Stars" are all the same size

 

[TROLL]

im feelin it

 

[dj-j2k]

gets better and better

 

[Shaun P]

This one better or worse? ^Made this before that post,lol

This looks better...

 

[kingsvillektp]

lose the smoke effect on the star. LOGOS should be more of a symbol & text.

The blue star isnt aligned right with the outer stroke.

the 'r' and the 'z' should be the same font size as the rest...

if you like it that way... well... it just dont look right.

 

[Shaun P]

lose the smoke effect on the star. LOGOS should be more of a symbol & text.

The blue star isnt aligned right with the outer stroke.

the 'r' and the 'z' should be the same font size as the rest...

if you like it that way... well... it just dont look right.

yea, he's right... Just fix those things and it'll be ready to wrap up!