Lil Lucky Real Latin Rap
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Lucky, the more you speak the more you make yourself look bad.
1. Sadly,. a rapper of your caliber doesnt have much of a chance here in the bay...see out here rappers are a dime a dozen and everybody and they mama has a studio..Out here is your lyrics aint top notch, your going to get lost in an ocean of rappers 10x more talented then you. Maybe in Texas your raps are seen as good...out here your lyrics are way too simple and easy...you rhyme the same word (rhyming FACE with FACE..cmon dude that aint even trying) You need to pur more though into your raps, dont just pick the first word that rhymes....Do you know what a metaphor is? a simile? There is a thing called wordplay that you are really lacking...Be more creative with how you say things...when you rhyme easy words like Glock-Block-Rock-Cock, Game-Same-Thang-Slang it show that you wrote the rap in 15 minutes and didnt put any real effort into creating quality music.
THIS IS THE BAY AND WE GO HARD ON CATS THAT AINT GOT WHAT IT TAKES.
YOU CLAIM TO BE THE NEXT BIG THING, YOU KEEP SAYING YOU WILL BLOW UP, YOU KEEP SAYING YOUR THE BEST LATIN RAPPER...so far what you have shown us is some weak ass 3rd grade raps, a video with a fat pregnant penguin lookin broad and some bammer weed and your roaches, and a whole bunch of worthless songs.
It sounds like you dont even try to be a good rapper, Just because it rhymes doesnt make it a rap...
You need to seriously step your game up....If you say folks are bumpin your shit like that...Then why are you on here trying to prove to us you got what it takes....WE DONT KNOW YOU, AND FRANKLY THE BAY DONT NEED ANY MORE RAPPERS...
concentrate of sewin up your home turf before you try and take on a market like the SF Bay Area homie...San Antonio might be a grimey city ...but the rap game is Cali aint foir the weak, if you cant take fools sayin your shit is weak...STOP RAPPING...
the story you are trying to tell with your music has been told 150,000 times or more out here...we've all heard it already...give us something new..Im tired of hearing "rappers" cry about what they dont have...boo fuckin hoo...cry a river,build a bridge and get the fuck over it already....Get up, get out and get something...sittin around smokin them bammer blunts will get you nowhere fast..life is what you make it kid.
and being a true "meskin" or "mexicano" has nothing to do with you not having enough talent to succesd in one of the hardest markets for music sales...
then again, im trying to teach common sense to a kid who raps about having roaches like hes proud of it....
you will not blow up in the bay with the way your music is now....
No me gusta su música y creo que hay muy poco talento. Tal vez usted sólo debe unirse a una pandilla y el ajetreo.
1. Sadly,. a rapper of your caliber doesnt have much of a chance here in the bay...see out here rappers are a dime a dozen and everybody and they mama has a studio..Out here is your lyrics aint top notch, your going to get lost in an ocean of rappers 10x more talented then you. Maybe in Texas your raps are seen as good...out here your lyrics are way too simple and easy...you rhyme the same word (rhyming FACE with FACE..cmon dude that aint even trying) You need to pur more though into your raps, dont just pick the first word that rhymes....Do you know what a metaphor is? a simile? There is a thing called wordplay that you are really lacking...Be more creative with how you say things...when you rhyme easy words like Glock-Block-Rock-Cock, Game-Same-Thang-Slang it show that you wrote the rap in 15 minutes and didnt put any real effort into creating quality music.
THIS IS THE BAY AND WE GO HARD ON CATS THAT AINT GOT WHAT IT TAKES.
YOU CLAIM TO BE THE NEXT BIG THING, YOU KEEP SAYING YOU WILL BLOW UP, YOU KEEP SAYING YOUR THE BEST LATIN RAPPER...so far what you have shown us is some weak ass 3rd grade raps, a video with a fat pregnant penguin lookin broad and some bammer weed and your roaches, and a whole bunch of worthless songs.
It sounds like you dont even try to be a good rapper, Just because it rhymes doesnt make it a rap...
You need to seriously step your game up....If you say folks are bumpin your shit like that...Then why are you on here trying to prove to us you got what it takes....WE DONT KNOW YOU, AND FRANKLY THE BAY DONT NEED ANY MORE RAPPERS...
concentrate of sewin up your home turf before you try and take on a market like the SF Bay Area homie...San Antonio might be a grimey city ...but the rap game is Cali aint foir the weak, if you cant take fools sayin your shit is weak...STOP RAPPING...
the story you are trying to tell with your music has been told 150,000 times or more out here...we've all heard it already...give us something new..Im tired of hearing "rappers" cry about what they dont have...boo fuckin hoo...cry a river,build a bridge and get the fuck over it already....Get up, get out and get something...sittin around smokin them bammer blunts will get you nowhere fast..life is what you make it kid.
and being a true "meskin" or "mexicano" has nothing to do with you not having enough talent to succesd in one of the hardest markets for music sales...
then again, im trying to teach common sense to a kid who raps about having roaches like hes proud of it....
you will not blow up in the bay with the way your music is now....
No me gusta su música y creo que hay muy poco talento. Tal vez usted sólo debe unirse a una pandilla y el ajetreo.
mayne i was trying to leave this thread alone bruh
1) just cuz you make a song doesnt make you an artist just like standing in a garage doesnt make make you a car
2) pay attention at .53 seconds http://www.limelinx.com/files/95deb044ea9f3d5d3069c026f33a7c85
3) your attitude will destroy you in this game
4) goldtoes is a grinder and has a alotta connects so sit back perfect your craft be humble and you mite grow
1) just cuz you make a song doesnt make you an artist just like standing in a garage doesnt make make you a car
2) pay attention at .53 seconds http://www.limelinx.com/files/95deb044ea9f3d5d3069c026f33a7c85
3) your attitude will destroy you in this game
4) goldtoes is a grinder and has a alotta connects so sit back perfect your craft be humble and you mite grow
OK ITS ALL GRAVY BABY HIGHLY REQUESTED MESKIN WRECKIN BOYS DA GAME NEEDA CHANGE FRESH OUT DA STREET GAME SO I DONT GIVE A FUCK CUZ THIS SHIT STILL JAM http://soundcloud.com/lil_lucky210/7grams
