your brave for gettin up on stage in front of all your peers but you need to step your lyrical game up cuz the lyrics and delivery was wack and hella off beat, plus the lisp haha
Lol thats what im thinking. Im gone right now and thats shit had me rolling.
I dont know the lil nigga so im not really tryna clown but uhm if your doing this shit for fun then thats cool I freestyle every once in a while and I know im not great but if your serious about this which I think yo are you really need to just think.................................................................................................... and think.............................................................................................. and hopefully you will realize what im thinking.
TSSSSSSSSS HAAAAAAAAAA LIL DAN SPOMPIN AND WIGGIDY WOMPIN, LIL DAN YOU NEED TO MAKE A WARDROBE OF SOMEPAKISTANNI CLOTHES AND HIP HOP UM OUT MAKE IT ALL FRESH PUT ON A PRINCE HAT AND CROWN YOURSELF THE FRESH PRINCE OF PAKISTAN,
Lil Dan, you need to get better at rappin. But I give you hella props for going up there and talking shit the way you did. It does take a lot of cojones to do that...
yeah man I respect the fact that you have the courage to get up in front of your peers and do what you like.. but for real you have a lot of room for improvement.. thats not a bad thing, but you need to work on your wordplay and rhymes and definately your delivery.. cant knock you for trying tho.. keep doing what you do