Just want some feedback/opinions

[TheRemedy]

Whats up everybody

I'm not looking to sell or promote anything just would like some opinions. I know everyone has different taste, so some will feel it and some wont. This is my cousins page/music. I flow too, but I do the shit more as a hobby. Its definitely not your typical doe boy shit, so if thats what you like, you shouldn't click the link.

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=277216605 (I'm on the song=Just Because)

Eventually we will be putting out a free mixtape, and I'm going to start working on my shit.

All criticism is welcomed!

 

[lilboiblue]

I like the production for the most part....I think a lot of it could use some more time to tighten up the feel/flow...I would say there's some potential to improve...its a bit abstract/different which can be a good or a bad thing...Would definetly say its not bad, would like to hear a bit less repetitive hook....overall just tightening it up, sounds a bit rushed....but pretty good overall

 

[TheRemedy]

I like the production for the most part....I think a lot of it could use some more time to tighten up the feel/flow...I would say there's some potential to improve...its a bit abstract/different which can be a good or a bad thing...Would definetly say its not bad, would like to hear a bit less repetitive hook....overall just tightening it up, sounds a bit rushed....but pretty good overall

Abstract is the word I was looking for to explain the style,lol. Thanks for taking the time to listen. We all just trying to get better you know. I can say that a few songs are old (2 to three years) so they may even sound dated. Its just a stepping stone to get to another level eventually.

 

[DezertEagle]

Not bad. Can't say I heard anything that sets it apart from most the other rappers out there. Some the the lyrics seemed thrown together, they didn't really flow. But like I said it wasn't bad. Keep at it.