IS THIS A GOOD START????

[rhymatic]

GOIN NITRO(SNIPPET)
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5379883&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5379883&q=hi

LET ME KNO YALL!!!

 

[Tall T]

U still workin on this track? cuz you really need to fuck with that chorus alot more... U need to put way more energy into it, throw doubles an maybe even tripples under it, an those adlibs where u say 'goin psyhco' need to be louder an have more emoticion in em, an try some effects on the voice too...
The hook really needs to stand out on your track for people to like it, and right now to tell you the truth its BORING. keep at it tho

 

[rhymatic]

YEA MANE IM STILL WORKIN ON IT. I KNO THE LEVELS ARE A LIL LOW. BUT GOOD LOOKS ON THE FEEDBACK