inf gang come on kids......

  • Wanna Join? New users you can now register lightning fast using your Facebook or Twitter accounts.
Status
Not open for further replies.
Apr 11, 2008
10,015
5,600
113
113
WWW.PLEASEATSOMESHIT.COM
#62
Im Dope

VERY UNORIGINAL TITLE...Come on, fuck. I cant even count how many dudes have used this line and or phrase, title or metaphor....
1st verse, dudes sounds like he's now really into it, like someone else wrote it for him. The content is better than some cats Ive heard, but i dont hear any hunger in dudes voice.kinda boring
2nd verse. I hear more drive and hunger in this dude voice,he comes on busting pretty raw and keeps up the pace overall..this cat should have came on first cause he got talent..hook is just unoriginal and lame. 3rd voice is about in the middle ground, he could sound more motivated but has above average lyrics, just seems like he need more practice. The song overall is a lot better than the last one I reviewed for the INF dude Julio the Kidd...but I think the cats on the 2nd and 3rd verse made the 1st dude seem amateurish and I feel he could have been left off the song since it sounds like he began rappin about 2 months ago and still hasnt hit the purberty stage of his flow.
 
Apr 11, 2008
10,015
5,600
113
113
WWW.PLEASEATSOMESHIT.COM
#64
Jump Jump 2009 Roman

Just a boring fast paced track IMO, its not what you say its how you say it, dude isnt really saying anything special..LOL..I just heard dude say something about "and you thought this shit was boring" ...thats hilarious because I was typing that line as he said it.. could see this being played for kids maybe and they would like it, but Im not feeling it.
Just does nothing for me and would get skipped if it were included on any cd. Nice homage is paid to Kriss Kross but just not good enough to be considered a remake...
 

nobe

Sicc OG
Oct 2, 2008
1,737
6
0
36
#65
Definitly Appreciate all the critism needles! make sure u check the track in my sig since you on a fuckin roll lmao, good lookin out bro!
 
Apr 11, 2008
10,015
5,600
113
113
WWW.PLEASEATSOMESHIT.COM
#66
no problem man...I love music and if anything I say helps another gropup or individual artist either improve his music, improve his lyrics or weake up from the fuckin dream, give up and realize rappin aint for him/her/them ..well then shit..Im happy.

Ya'll been real professional regarding my reviews and thats a sign you have the mental capacity to deal with record label executives if the time ever comes...Some people cannot handle hearing that they arent the rap stars they believe they are.

If some think my opinions are harsh...wait till a real deal record exec or A&R tears ya ass apart...They will critique everything from your delivery to ya name, your image and even that favorite song you dumped your heart and soul for 976 take and swore you got it right and it was a solid gold hit.

When Clive Davis, Randy Jackson, and Simon Cowell break you down to the point of tears and tell you your shit is garbage...you can do three things, either quit, take it back to the drawing board and make the neccessary changes suggested, or make threats and try and whoop everyones ass who dont like your music....

only one of those will get you anywhere in the music business.

Im gonna twist me up a blunt and peep ya track Nobe..
 
Apr 11, 2008
10,015
5,600
113
113
WWW.PLEASEATSOMESHIT.COM
#67
Nobe
"Put it up"

Track instrumental is a club type head bopper, Nobe definitely displays the ability to correctly deliver his lines,which are cleverly written and actual have me paying attention to what he's saying..some cats wrap and all you hear is a voice...I hear this dudes lyrics.
While the lyrics arent the best ive heard from nobe, they fits the type of crowd this song would attract..its good club or party track if your lookin for one to play. The chorus is catchy enough to stick with you, and the bottom line is your able to understand what hes talkin about and catchy a few good punchlines.

Not bad at all man..First thing that comes to mind now is...

Do you currently have a solo album done or in the works?
 

nobe

Sicc OG
Oct 2, 2008
1,737
6
0
36
#68
I have my mixtape on datpiff.com just search nobe, the great white hope, I can hear a bad review just for the title but it has straight bangers on it. Peep that and if u still have some energy review that thang. I am workin on my first album: the search for nobility right now, which is going to surpass anything Ive put out so far. Thanks for the review on put it up by the way, most people don't give new music a chance.
 

Dana Dane

RIP Vallejo Kid
May 3, 2002
26,982
11,626
113
51
#69
I guess this isn't a blatant Figs/Jacka rip off either.

Props to the first person to notice!


I can appreciate your hustle, but the lack of originality is what has been choking the bay for years now.
 

Toro

Sicc OG
Apr 25, 2006
10,812
46
0
45
www.myspace.com
#79
I guess this isn't a blatant Figs/Jacka rip off either.

Props to the first person to notice!


I can appreciate your hustle, but the lack of originality is what has been choking the bay for years now.
Hahahaha, at first I thought you were talking about the whole cover being ripped off. Then I seen it.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.