I'm steppin my game up.

[yes]

ched

 

[Hyfeeboy]

sound like some shit 50 cent will spit to

 

[lopro]

ched

arite thanks.

sound like some shit 50 cent will spit to

appreciate it even if im not a fan of 50. but i gotta agree.

as a matter of fact..
http://www.zshare.net/audio/69455339dea750/

 

[lopro]

got a new one on the myspace.. number 04 i did it a few days ago and just got back to it. lemme know wussup.

 

[BASEDVATO]

Nah I rap and make all my beats, and probally a better engineer then producer

But its fun jumpen on other peoples beats, just gives you a different vibe while writing

www.myspace.com/savysosa

 

[lopro]

yeh i'll see if i can get back to u with on of my tracks. appreciate it.

 

[Pak Dan]

thats cool.. and wtf does that gotta do with my thread? lol jp

HA I WAS THINKIN DA SAME THING BUT I WAS BLAZED WHEN I WROTE THAT L0L


I THINK I WROTE IT CUZ U WERE TALKIN BOUT DOIN SAMPLES FROM OLD RECORDS??

 

[Pak Dan]

BTW THAT 'DONT SPILL IT' REMIX IS COO.. I THINK U HAD IT ON A WHILE AGO BUT I AINT PEEP IT

 

[Thugpoet510]

I think it slaps, I would add a different kick sound tho. Raise up the hi hats alil because they there but doesn't stand on their own.

Also make the bassline stand out more, it thumps but change the sound of it to something deeper.

This is just my 2 cents, I have heard alot worse. Just keep learning new scales and chords. Keep getting new sounds, so far this could be a solid track with the right rapper.

My favorite part is when that synth comes in I guess what would be the hook part. Keep doing it brah.

 

[lopro]

i appreciate the real constructive criticism man i'll put some of those in mind.

 

[Speedy]

Beat has alot of potential, the hi- hat is numerically placed at a weird spot (it doesn’t flow). They should be doing something else (Be placed some where else). And get rid of that horrible worm/lead. Other then that I like the beat especially how the piano is simple and well layered.

 

[Speedy]

1 more thing. You should start practicing playing everything live instead quantizing everything. This beat would be 10x better if the drums had a live swing to it. Just thought I tell you that cuz you seem to be going for that Dre style and that was he does or his ghost producers. But one day your going to be making alot of beats for people. Keep in mind I was only reffering to the mobbing beat. But the Body Rock and Hard club beat are on point.