I need your guy's Honest feedback on this track

[BIG J]

Click tha Link Below, and peep, Never give up/Who can you trust

Cuz tha Fools in tha Studio Forum aren't helpin' me out on this. But itz a rough mix. I'm not sure if I even like it or not, So help me out.

 

[Tenkamenin]

It's aight, I don't like how the beat switches up when it gets to the chorus, but I do like the beat when yall folks are flowing over it. 6.5/10

 

[BIG J]

Thanks 2010,
I made tha Beat, but I wasn't in Charge of What sounds were used, It was a Collaboration, Kinda off, but it was sum good Practice,
Thanks Bra

 

[-TiM C-]

i like the beat, voice and delivery average, same wit lyrics. i'd bump it for a week or two, then take it out my Cd player,

 

[BIG J]

Coo shit, thanks for your guys Feedback,itz greatly appreciated. But tha shit I'm workin' on is so much better than that, I shall be back with sum heaterz for ya'll soon.

 

[M-PHIVE]

ABOUT A 3 OR 4, ITS SOUNDS FUNNY, WHAT KINDA EQUIP YALL USE?...ABA

 

[BIG J]

Yeah, I myslef would give it about a 3 or 4

We just were Fuckin' with tha Presets on tha Trinity through Cubase 5.0
The mic i use is a AKG C3000B condenser.

Fuck it, i don't even like it now that I listened to it more, ima take it down pretty quick here.

 

[Juan Million]

I liked the beat and your voice is coo, but I wasnt feelin the lyrics at all. Still good though, keep doin ya thang.

 

[BIG J]

Thanks again, you do know which rapper is me right, tha one with tha lower Voice

 

[Juan Million]

you do know which rapper is me right, tha one with tha lower Voice

Yup

 

[M-PHIVE]

Re: Yeah, I myslef would give it about a 3 or 4

We just were Fuckin' with tha Presets on tha Trinity through Cubase 5.0
The mic i use is a AKG C3000B condenser.

Fuck it, i don't even like it now that I listened to it more, ima take it down pretty quick here.

NAH ITS COO, IT JUST SOUNDS FUNNY, SO THAT DRAWS ATTENTION AWAY PHROM THE LYRICS...ABA

 

[BIG J]

^^^

I agree, tha Beat does sound funny, If I had all the Power over how tha Beat Sounded, it woulda been much Tighter.

 

[Stealth]

Its aight. Its just not...heated...i guess. I agree with the whole beat thing. I don't like how it changes on the chorus. And it seems really simplistic as far as the regular beat goes. Not bad, just not my style.

 

[FacedWithDeath]

Muthafucka too many timez!

But 2-b-real it sounded like--->>>>>>

 

[BIG J]

You know, thatz how I actually Talk, I say MuthaFucka Too much.
I sure as hell can't say Nigga cuz I'm white.
Thanks for peepin' though, any feedback is good feedback

 

[steadyflossin]

the delivery and lyrics need work, the beat is about a 7/10