I Made 2 New Tracks (PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK)

[TheTruest]

www.myspace.com/truthhimself

Hip Hop 101

and

Ride The Wind

are both new tell me what you think

 

[murderman]

i liked the beginning of ride the wind but the second you start uppin a bitch an pussifyin' yourself over love i stopped listenin... it dont matter how good you are you jus threw yourself out a window. an thats real

hip hop 101 is pretty dope.. slow down tho either that or step your speed game up. it dont matter how fast you spit somethin its the delivery that matters... you only 16? you got it pimp.. do somethin with this shit.. jus keep evolving dude...

(an jus to let everybody else know i take hip hop "real hip hop" over any other genre of rap.. this dude got talent in that genre)

 

[TheTruest]

aight thanks for the feedback man...........i took down Ride The Wind cuz I hadn't got much good feedback on it so i put up a new track called "Win or Lose" if ya'll wanna check that one

 

[T-Spoon]

shit sounds good homie, keep doin ur thang. i personally like the papers lines best. stay up. fold.

 

[1023]

yea man dem tracks is hotter then the tracks they b makin on "the white rapper show" and u only sixteen, u got it. i would suggest pickin up some books though and studdien the biz cuz u gon needit.

 

[EastBayBeast510]

WASNT FEELIN THE FIRST TRACK...

hip hop 101... shit tight... u got flows mayne keep it up...

 

[Ri0t0uZ]

a new era is nice man....im feelin this shit...u only 16....u got a lot of elevation to go....ima look forward to hearin more shit from u man...keep it up

 

[satchel]

1st one was so so...other than that shit was nice

 

[shady_warrior]

New Era, i'm feelin that. The rest not so much, but New Era, thats the shit. Keep it up

 

[KODOGG]

Some reason i get

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[SMOKE1230]

Yeah that shits pizzi dog

 

[IDontWannaBeMe]

hip-hop 101 is a good song, i like how you switched up your flow a few times, the metaphors are nice too, keep it up